The Waiting Game

The rules are simple for those who are leaving
Just forget all the sacred vows that you made
The one that is waiting must keep on believing
It's worth waiting and heartaches will someday fade

                 Cruel words again spoken
            The door slams as he leaves once more
    Tears from her eyes flowing, her heart again broken
             As it has been so  many times before

She waits and she wonders; does he still love me?
           Does he still tell his heart he is mine?
Will he soon forget me, enjoying his chance to be free?
            Or am I just the fool he left behind?

           Her poor heart is not meant for hating
          But she's so tired of being left behind
             She's growing so old while waiting
         Only sadness remains in her poor tortured mind

       While sleeping, she reaches out to touch his face
        calls his name, awakens and finds he's not there
       Only lonely darkness provides comforting grace
       and she cries out, God,why doesn't he care?

       Tossing and turning, another sleepless night
             Sunlight shining in tired swollen eyes
        She's still waiting, trying to make things right
      Still loving not forgetting, no matter how hard she tries

            Days turn to weeks, to months, then to years
                She's still waiting for him to return
            Waiting and watching through all of her tears
           Finally realizing she was the least of his concern

          All alone on her bed she lay, in a winter nights cold
          Friends hadn't seen her for such a long, long time
          Her waiting was finally over, and she felt so very old
                 So many wasted years, it seems like a crime

          Many more of us who love will play the waiting game
          and the love in our hearts will always be pure
          Those who leave us who love them shall live in shame
                    Yes, but the waiting game is over for her.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/9/2016 10:53:00 PM
Guy G, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2010 4:49:00 PM
Very creative and interesting write on The Waiting Game, Guy
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