The Vows

My love, I make a solemn vow to you,
Before our families, dear friends and God,
My love will always be completely true,
Until one of us lies beneath the sod.
I have no thought I ever could defraud
This precious man who opens up his heart
To match my friends and family applaud.
There is no roadblock keeping us apart.

And yet I knew right from the very start,
I’d made the selfsame promise to another.
I gave to him the whole of my young heart
And like now, vowed that there would be no other.
Now as I pledge, part of my heart I save,
For one who lies so lowly in his grave.



won 3rd in Brian's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Congrats Joyce on this lovely piece being a big winner in Brian's contest luv.. super tender words..
Puddifoot Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 4:18 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this very touching sonnet...
Roberts Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 11:08 PM
awesome poem Joyce, congrats on your win in the contest
Taylor Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:41 AM
Congrats on your win, Joyce. Nice going. luv Ralph
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Zzzzz Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 9:23 AM
Bitter-sweet, but beautiful! Love, Robert.
Ramage Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Beautiful and deeply touching. Lovely. Lee
Mehta Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 6:29 PM
Romantic and lovely, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Finding love the second time around is so special, Joyce. I'm glad you had that opportunity. People don't seem to take their vows as seriously these days, but I know for sure that you do. Beautiful sonnet that touched my heart and gave me hope for a second chance. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 2:29 PM
romantically beautiful Joyce filled with deep luv and desire for a special spouse waiting... beautiful Sonnet my friend..full of depth..luv..
Kearley Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 10:36 AM
That is really sweet.
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