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The Vows

My love, I make a solemn vow to you, Before our families, dear friends and God, My love will always be completely true, Until one of us lies beneath the sod. I have no thought I ever could defraud This precious man who opens up his heart To match my friends and family applaud. There is no roadblock keeping us apart. And yet I knew right from the very start, I’d made the selfsame promise to another. I gave to him the whole of my young heart And like now, vowed that there would be no other. Now as I pledge, part of my heart I save, For one who lies so lowly in his grave. won 3rd in Brian's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/25/2011 3:08:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on this lovely piece being a big winner in Brian's contest luv.. super tender words..
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:18:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this very touching sonnet...
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Date: 7/23/2011 11:08:00 PM
awesome poem Joyce, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 7/22/2011 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Joyce. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 7/22/2011 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2011 9:23:00 AM
Bitter-sweet, but beautiful! Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:09:00 PM
Beautiful and deeply touching. Lovely. Lee
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:29:00 PM
Romantic and lovely, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2011 2:49:00 PM
Finding love the second time around is so special, Joyce. I'm glad you had that opportunity. People don't seem to take their vows as seriously these days, but I know for sure that you do. Beautiful sonnet that touched my heart and gave me hope for a second chance. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/21/2011 2:29:00 PM
romantically beautiful Joyce filled with deep luv and desire for a special spouse waiting... beautiful Sonnet my friend..full of depth..luv..
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:36:00 AM
That is really sweet.
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