The Void of You

There are days I wonder how I could ever bear the loss of you. It scares me. Your absence. The silence. The emptiness. How I would long to nurture the void of you inside me. I can’t imagine life without :

    •	the twinkle in your eye
    •	your charm and laughter
    •	your generous affection
    •	the way you smile so freely
    •	your boyish sweetness and affection
    •	your gentle words and kindnesses
    •	even your silly comments and bad jokes
    •	your funny quirks and passions
    •	your unwavering support
    •	the safety of your arms
    •	and most of all those sweet nothings



AP: 2nd place 2021

Submitted on July 27, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 3, JULY 2019 - LIST sponsored by DEAR HEART  -  RANKED 2ND
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La France Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Thank you, Constance. Most appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 12:40 PM
this is so sweet, Line. Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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August 11, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Merryman Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 9:02 PM
So sweet, Line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
Gauthier Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 11:44 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Ibeh Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Quite lovely, Line:-) I really enjoyed this. Congrats on your win!
Gauthier Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much, Edward.
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August 8, 2019 at 4:31 AM
- Memories that touch a heart - Congratulations on your win, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 6:13 AM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Great Poem love it, Great win!
Gauthier Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 9:22 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Delaney Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Such a beautiful list. The things we daily take for granted until we lose them. A treasure beyond measure. Love, SuZ
Gauthier Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, SuZ.
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July 27, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Those sweet nothings sound like sweet everythings when I read this beautiful tribute, Line. I have sent you Soup Mail.
Gauthier Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 5:16 PM
Absolutely. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
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