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The Void of You

There are days I wonder how I could ever bear the loss of you. It scares me. Your absence. The silence. The emptiness. How I would long to nurture the void of you inside me. I can’t imagine life without : • the twinkle in your eye • your charm and laughter • your generous affection • the way you smile so freely • your boyish sweetness and affection • your gentle words and kindnesses • even your silly comments and bad jokes • your funny quirks and passions • your unwavering support • the safety of your arms • and most of all those sweet nothings AP: 2nd place 2021 Submitted on July 27, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 3, JULY 2019 - LIST sponsored by DEAR HEART - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 8/12/2019 6:54:00 PM
Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
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Date: 8/12/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/11/2019 12:40:00 PM
this is so sweet, Line. Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 8/11/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/8/2019 9:02:00 PM
So sweet, Line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 8/8/2019 11:44:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/8/2019 1:31:00 PM
Quite lovely, Line:-) I really enjoyed this. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/8/2019 8:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Edward.
Date: 8/8/2019 4:31:00 AM
- Memories that touch a heart - Congratulations on your win, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2019 6:13:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/7/2019 9:01:00 PM
Great Poem love it, Great win!
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Date: 8/7/2019 9:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/1/2019 3:34:00 PM
Such a beautiful list. The things we daily take for granted until we lose them. A treasure beyond measure. Love, SuZ
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Date: 8/1/2019 5:42:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, SuZ.
Date: 7/27/2019 3:47:00 PM
Those sweet nothings sound like sweet everythings when I read this beautiful tribute, Line. I have sent you Soup Mail.
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Date: 7/27/2019 5:16:00 PM
Absolutely. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

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