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The Void

Surrounded by people I sit here alone Head full of empty like a nuclear zone I watch and see nothing that I can recall How further down can my weary self fall I sit here in tatters trying to cope Try to read but there’s so little hope As soon as I’ve read it, the last word it left My brain is in turmoil ,of thought it’s bereft If only for one day I could normal be Walking and laughing with some company Then maybe from somewhere I could find The passport to the good life that I left behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/14/2014 11:02:00 AM
A personal jouney is always just that. Even if married, there are times that we've sat. By ourselve's with our thoughts that we cannot bemoan. The truth always hurt's that we're always alone. But that's when we realize that God's by our side. To help keep us going to enjoy the ride. Peace. :)
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/14/2014 2:29:00 PM
just brilliant Robert that you can turn your repy into poetry. Pure genius Kudos. Andy Lyle
Date: 2/13/2014 9:34:00 PM
Great images. Well done. May your Soup experience be only in its infancy. Enjoy it, and I'll be back later.
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/14/2014 2:27:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments and encouraging words.Regards Andy

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