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The Voice of the Dark Wine Sea

Poseidon hold your trident up high with jubilee we hear the voice that fill the dark wine sea make the tides swell with loyalty from the thrust of your gaint fish tail

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2012 9:35:00 PM

wow... love the waves and Gods control...pd

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 12/23/2011 5:46:00 AM

Still lovely after millenia, the phrase "wine dark sea", with its Homeric echoes (and, perhaps, thanks to reinforcement from Nikos Kazantzakis and Kimon Friar), evokes Hellenic classicism. I liked your plea to Poseidon to "hold your trident up high with jubilee."