The Voice

"can't" says the, voice inside, but i hold on, unruffled and calm, shove harder to, dimly hear, inside, "can"
21/3/2012 ninette sashi.prabhu(zeauoxian)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Burch Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations on your win,Sashi!!!Well Done!! Wonderfully encouraging... :)bighuggsss,love~deb
Prabhu Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 9:10 AM
thank you Deborah>>>>>>>>>~sashi
Gorelick Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 6:04 PM
Oh well done! congrats..this is clever. BG
Prabhu Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 9:11 AM
thank you Barbara........~sashi
Merryman Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 3:49 PM
Well done, Sashi. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Prabhu Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 9:11 AM
thank you for the wishes Kim..........~sashi
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Ninette" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
Prabhu Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 9:32 AM
thank you very much CAROL........~sashi
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:13 PM
congrats sashi on a terrific win for this excellent Ninette written luv..
Prabhu Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:34 PM
thank you Linda
Poet Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 8:24 PM
This is excellent Sashi.A sure winner here.
Prabhu Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:35 PM
your propechy is true......and has been earlier too...... thanks a million Kash for the encouragement and motivation...........~sashi
Prabhu Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 8:43 AM
thank you Kash.~sashi
Grisetti Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 1:47 PM
Great job. I love reading these.
Prabhu Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 9:16 AM
thanks ...my first attempt at this technicality of poetry......was a gr8 experience....~sashi
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