The Voice

The Voice

                        Naming this voice in my head
            Causes me to dig deep in a place
 Where dreams slowly fade away, and hope has gone unfed
Frequent darkness and loneliness, I’m struggling in this chaotic space

                        Willfully traveling through this emotional state
I begin to realize, this may be my eternal fate
Allowing past failures control, my mind can’t carry this weight

      Feels like I’m slowly falling, holding on by a strand
            The mind plays certain tricks, hope you understand
                        Voice so intrusive, I know firsthand

Mara is your name, the one I’m trying to shed
            You’re causing all these setbacks, these thoughts I must replace
      With affirmations, my soul can relate
                        To joy of positivity, this voice now banned


                     
August 7, 2021
Content: Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcgrenera Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 7:55 PM
This is a great simple yet deep relatable smooth flow of a poem, and I really like the style in which the format is written. Not overthought or over-worded ..nice!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Your "The Voice" is a beautiful rhyme write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
La France Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Ms, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look beautiful, well done ~Constance
Affection Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Thank you Constance. It was a fun time. I enjoyed the challenge
Buhagiar Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 2:51 AM
I apologise for not noticing your win in the contest. I hope I'm not losing interest in PS.
Affection Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 7:04 PM
oh, than you so much Victor
Roper Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 9:12 PM
MS, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest . Hugs Eve
Alex Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 8:11 AM
A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!
Affection Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Christuraj
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