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All summer long the feeder hung— its visitors a timid lot. I listened to their calling, sung through languid days, sultry and hot. And then I left a little trail, each day more seed, closer to me. I did not know if I'd prevail, or if my hands would ever be a place of trust, a soft embrace— if you would pause a moment there to share with me a breath of grace, a fleeting joy, a wordless prayer. Today I sat so still and calm... your feathered heartbeat in my palm.

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Date: 5/26/2023 9:13:00 AM
A lovely heartfelt poem filled with beautiful imagery. It takes a tender soul to be patient when wanting to help those that are hurting are in need, Katharine. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/12/2023 4:02:00 AM
Such a beautiful piece Katherine, penned with good imagery and insightfulness too. Have a lovely day, Gordon
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Date: 5/11/2023 7:50:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem, Katharine. A real smiler!
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Date: 5/10/2023 2:22:00 PM
Beautiful! You know...I saw a wounded bird today, just fltting around; it couldn't fly. It broke my heart, but I had nowhere to take her. By the time I got back, she was gone. Sigh. Loved your 'wordless prayer' I sent one just now. :)
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Date: 5/6/2023 10:09:00 PM
I enjoyed these touching, tenderly conveyed thoughts about happy time spent in nature's grace.
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