Notes About The Poem

The Visitor

All summer long the feeder hung—
its visitors a timid lot.
I listened to their calling, sung
through languid days, sultry and hot.
And then I left a little trail,
each day more seed, closer to me.
I did not know if I'd prevail,
or if my hands would ever be
a place of trust, a soft embrace—
if you would pause a moment there
to share with me a breath of grace,
a fleeting joy, a wordless prayer.


Today I sat so still and calm...
your feathered heartbeat in my palm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 9:13 AM
A lovely heartfelt poem filled with beautiful imagery. It takes a tender soul to be patient when wanting to help those that are hurting are in need, Katharine. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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May 12, 2023 at 4:02 AM
Such a beautiful piece Katherine, penned with good imagery and insightfulness too. Have a lovely day, Gordon
Turner Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 7:50 PM
This is a wonderful poem, Katharine. A real smiler!
Hind Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 2:22 PM
Beautiful! You know...I saw a wounded bird today, just fltting around; it couldn't fly. It broke my heart, but I had nowhere to take her. By the time I got back, she was gone. Sigh. Loved your 'wordless prayer' I sent one just now. :)
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May 6, 2023 at 10:09 PM
I enjoyed these touching, tenderly conveyed thoughts about happy time spent in nature's grace.
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