The Vision of a Valentine (Co-Written W/Linda-Marie Bariana)

(co-written with Linda-Marie Bariana, "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup)

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He to She ...

Angelic chocolate candy so divine,
The only kind to send my valentine,
Each one is filled with sensual delight,
Tasty treats, my senses, to ignite.  

My valentine is an angel from above,
As beautiful as a snow white dove,
She fits me as a soft warm glove,
And she gives me sweet exotic love.

Angels are known for their classic beauty,
Mine gives me love, not out of duty,
With wings of warmth she is my cutie,
She's always sweet and never snooty.


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She to He ...

You are my specialty confection,
With caramel charms and constant protection,
 Loving me with angelic direction,
Memories ever flow reflection.

Chocolate kisses from passion's lips,
Nougat centers and cremes sweet sips,
Nuts and jellies like emotional dips,
Embraces so gentle my heart flips.

Pretty box of chocolates on Valentine's Day,
Gifts of love as the angels play
Their harps, with cords of atmosphere sway,
In love with you I will always stay.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 10:19 PM
what a nice tribute to love. Ellen
Esquire Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 10:59 PM
Dear Marty, Congratulations To YOU and the "Sweetheart" of POETRYSOUP This And "Heaven's Valentine Rose" are Classics YOU and she Should be Very Proud You Two work well together and the Reader gets Double The Talent and satisfaction of the World Of POETRY Bravo!! There must be an Encore ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 9:48 AM
OK .. just posted the Heaven's Valentine Rose co-write.. take a look and tell me your thoughts on the finished product... thankxxx for allowing me to do this piece with u... I think its a great inspiration piece of poetry... from the heart.. to the readers... luv.. "Sweetheart"
Sweetheart Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 7:58 PM
U got it Marty... through the power of the computer vibrations of talent... coming through... the special gifts of your poetry "beauties" will always shine on Soup ...thankxxx for your neat comments tonight .. whispers included ... luv.. Linda-Marie.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Quick contest posted just now if u are interested .. only 10 poems allowed with four already submitted.. check it out to enter .,.... hurry .... good luck ... luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 8:42 PM
SOUP MAIL...
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February 4, 2010 at 7:09 PM
I LIKED THIS POEMS . I READ A COUPLE OF MORE POEMS .THEY ARE DEEP. I WISH I COULD WRITE DEEP .MOSTLY I LIKE TO WRITE FUN STUFF .I CAN CREATE ANY POEM IN LESS THAN AN HOUR.JUST WISH I COULD BE DEEP LIKE SOME OF YOUR POEMS.I LIKE HAVEING FUN IN MY POETRY.THATS THE ONLY TIME I CAN OVER USE MY IMAGINATION.THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 6:45 PM
Thankxxx for your special comments tonight on my poetry and my big win... am so grateful for other poets enjoying my poetry and choosing them as winners... hope u are ready for the blizzard.. we have been predicted for 24 inches over a three day period... yikes!! keep the shovel handy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Fraser Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 2:25 PM
A most tasty yummy piece Linda & Marty, just delightful >> James
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 12:45 PM
a yummy yummy reply to his sweet confection delight! Luv, Andrea
Townsend Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 8:55 AM
A beautiful write from two very talented writers. Makes my sweet tooth go crazy! Very Romantic! Smiles from Lolita
Pickett Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:48 AM
BRAVO, you two BRAVO..... Directly to my favs with the 200 dollars....:JP]
Witt-King Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Very lovely! It's like a dance...or even a musical duet. Well Done!
Chircop Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 10:16 PM
OOLLLaalllllla..I love this poem you and Linda created Marty,going to my favz..Hundred out of hundred..Charma
K. Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 8:38 PM
and I was right! This is a really lovely poem written by two talented and sweet souls :) hehe had me craving for some chocolate myself :) A very fitting valentine poem indeed :) looking forward to more "duets" from you and Linda :) thanks Linda for informing me about this sweet poem :)
Culverhouse Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 6:20 PM
makes me want chocolate, must be getting old!! ha ha!!
Kapoor Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 6:16 PM
It’s a beautiful duet Song very nicely written by both of you. Although each one of you has written it jointly but while reading it sounds that I am listening a Song sung by both of you. That is lovely. Keep the loves always splashing from your hearts on the shores of life (A line from my incomplete poem). It was a joy reading this beautiful Poem. Congrats to both of you Linda Marie and Marty Owens and loves Ravindra
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 5:27 PM
Now that is a very beautiful and sensual poem. It tastefully expresses love.... the kind anyone would love, I feel sure of it. You two did a great job on this co-written poem. Talent shared in this is greatly enjoyed. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Delacroix Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 3:39 PM
How very sweet indeed! Great work of the pen for the both of you. I wonder how you guys do these duo writings? Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
Mcgovern Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 2:36 PM
Your vision is divine. I love the two party approach. It really brings out the best of what Valentine's Cupid does best. Keep the love flowing, this is one of the best. Mac
Guzzi Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 2:36 PM
sweet ;) Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 1:58 PM
OK .. U may begin again for faith based one.. I luv doing them the best believe it or not... am doing one with Doug too... yahoo me with words... luv.. LInda-Marie..
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Glad u enjoyed my Haiku and this truly turned out so well... thankxxx for this great experience ... get ready for our second soon... luv.. "Sweetheart"
Haick Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 1:37 PM
Great Valentine poems, great collaboration, Linda-Marie and Marty! Goes to my favs. Peace and love, Audrey P.S. Thank you for reading and posting comments to my poem.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Congrats Marty on a beautiful co write and for allowing me the honor to write with u my dear friend... amazing finished product and sentiments of the day signaled out for all lovers and those in luv... thankxxx... luv.. Linda-Marie
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