The Vision

Hmmm... sounds delectable... Terry (and thanks for the clever comment!)

Lovely vision indeed, really enjoyed this short piece......

Had me chuckling with this poem. No need for glasses on this one. ha ha love phyl

Never get tired of this one, just a great tour with 9 words.

Interesting work that leaves me with questions..I no longer can wear those high heels unless I wear them seated in a wheel chair and some push me ...Sara

This is kinda intimate, I think.. which really sweet. glad to read thi.. Enjoyed this a lot.

That's for describing me so well Situation! J/K-very clever!

Sounds like one sexy lady! Nicely rhymed :)

sounds more like a dream of yours haha just kiddin. an 87 yr old man calls me hot foot. has just lost his wife, thinks he's in love with me as I walk by, the people are really nice to me here in this lil' ville, so I'm staying, retiring and writing here for free, who cares. I'm just basic, I walk 1 or 2 miles a day but hate heels, I have a 71/2 E shoe size, moccassins perfence but like the nikes, or believe it or not sketchers...:)

oh so cool this Monoku Situation .. great rhyme sequence to enhance that visual luv..

Saddle up darling; I'm waiting! :)

Very well done my friend. oxox love Anne-Lise

Hmmmm Yes indeed a vision. Good job and very clever. God Bless,. JB

Wow this is very clever- I enjoyed your vision, Bren : )

Re your sweet comment: love hasn't been all that kind to me either on the other hand there have been some wonderful highs. Like bees to a flower, it somehow is irresistable when it presents itself! :) P S Do you have a name?

Cool monoku!

???? ha ha! I see a woman in this one, how about you? Nice tour you are on my friend; the description defies the imagination! Luv, Lizzie

Smile ˜ Hahaha, I love the way that you took farm animals and twisted our imaginations with them; kudos ˜ John!:) ˜