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The Vision

Perfect waist, high heel taste, buns galore, body tour.

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Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/26/2012 2:57:00 AM

Hmmm... sounds delectable... Terry (and thanks for the clever comment!)

James Fraser

Date: 4/26/2012 4:46:00 PM

Lovely vision indeed, really enjoyed this short piece......

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/9/2012 12:08:00 PM

Had me chuckling with this poem. No need for glasses on this one. ha ha love phyl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/7/2012 1:44:00 PM

Never get tired of this one, just a great tour with 9 words.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/7/2012 12:14:00 PM

self servce. giving her the once over.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2012 3:07:00 PM

Interesting work that leaves me with questions..I no longer can wear those high heels unless I wear them seated in a wheel chair and some push me ...Sara

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/2/2012 7:29:00 AM

This is kinda intimate, I think.. which really sweet. glad to read thi.. Enjoyed this a lot.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 1/31/2012 7:36:00 PM

That's for describing me so well Situation! J/K-very clever!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 1/30/2012 6:38:00 PM

Sounds like one sexy lady! Nicely rhymed :)

The Situation
Date: 2/1/2012 9:24:00 AM

Natalie TRR

Lucinda Cayton

Date: 1/30/2012 11:06:00 AM

sounds more like a dream of yours haha just kiddin. an 87 yr old man calls me hot foot. has just lost his wife, thinks he's in love with me as I walk by, the people are really nice to me here in this lil' ville, so I'm staying, retiring and writing here for free, who cares. I'm just basic, I walk 1 or 2 miles a day but hate heels, I have a 71/2 E shoe size, moccassins perfence but like the nikes, or believe it or not sketchers...:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2012 11:39:00 AM

oh so cool this Monoku Situation .. great rhyme sequence to enhance that visual luv..

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/27/2012 5:32:00 PM

Saddle up darling; I'm waiting! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/27/2012 2:27:00 PM

Very well done my friend. oxox love Anne-Lise

Judy Ball

Date: 1/26/2012 10:36:00 PM

Hmmmm Yes indeed a vision. Good job and very clever. God Bless,. JB

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/25/2012 10:10:00 PM

Wow this is very clever- I enjoyed your vision, Bren : )

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/25/2012 8:41:00 PM

Re your sweet comment: love hasn't been all that kind to me either on the other hand there have been some wonderful highs. Like bees to a flower, it somehow is irresistable when it presents itself! :) P S Do you have a name?