The Vision

As I sat in Sunday school stupor that morning. 
I thought without thinking this day was no different. 
The sun hurt my eyes as I gazed at the window. 		
My thoughts were diffused by four conversations. 
Each one was mundane in their orientation.  
Although their delivery was in no way obtuse.

I heard the word vision and came to my senses.
It holds special meaning for me and my loved ones.
“Hold on”, I caught myself saying in silence.  
“Hold on let me speak.”  Finally voiced in despair.
“You all have known me to be rational and honest.”
My Friend's story is what I told them that day. 

"Robert and I had gone to bed in the evening
It was early but we were asleep straight away."
“Wake up” the loud voice invaded my sleeping.
“Wake up” it commanded, “you need help right away.”
“Your check up was wrong, you are stricken with cancer.”
“A bird will confirm that I came here to warn you.”

“Did you hear that noise?” Robert asked in confusion.
“God was speaking to me, he came with a warning.”
“Or maybe an angel.  Did you hear what he told me?”
“Only loud noise, and the brightness, no speaking at all.
I explained what was said, we were up the whole night.
I went in the next morning for x-ray and check up.

On the way to the building from my car in the lot.
A Red bird on the sidewalk flew up to my shoulder.
It sat there, not moving, ten seconds moreover.
My confidence soared though I could never doubt it.		
The physician's exam found nothing out of ordinary.
I told the physician where the test should be made.

He dubiously checked and with the very next test
Found my problem as was foretold in the vision.
I now can bear witness to all who will listen.
That God is alive and will always protect us
If we believe he is near and always watching.
And pray in his name to his son for his favor. 
					
©  Feb 20 2010   For Catie's Divine Intervention contest
     Placed number 1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Charles. Love, Carol
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December 19, 2010 at 5:30 PM
Congratulations on your work being featured this week..Sara
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December 19, 2010 at 5:04 PM
Congrats Charles on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today with luv my friend.. happy holidays to u and Ms. Carolyn too..with luv..
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September 11, 2010 at 4:12 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Charles
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September 10, 2010 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest Charles. Love Carol
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September 10, 2010 at 2:13 PM
Congrats Charles on your winning poem in Catie's contest... a magnificent piece ..and top notch win to enjoy with luv..
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September 10, 2010 at 12:03 PM
sAbeautiful story well told. congratulations. Love,Joyce
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September 10, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Glad you are here with US! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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September 10, 2010 at 11:17 AM
These things do happen,....I have heard similar testimony that sometimes we need to pay closer attention to these signs from God. WEll told in your fine poem...Congratulations, Charles! ~ Carrie
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September 10, 2010 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on your success in Catie's contest. Love, Carolyn
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March 5, 2010 at 11:25 PM
wow, your story is maybe the most miraculous I 've yet read. Congratulations!!
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February 27, 2010 at 5:36 PM
Hey Charles, My congratulations on your win in JohnMoses "Most Awesome Paranormal Contest" Peace, Audrey
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February 27, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Charles, thank you for support of your poem in my contest. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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February 27, 2010 at 3:35 PM
beautiful experience well written. congratulations!
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February 27, 2010 at 7:22 AM
This poem was outstanding, Charles. Congratulations on ranking first in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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February 27, 2010 at 7:05 AM
Congrats Charles on your first place win in the Paranormal contest.. a wonderful write and a well deserved win for a wonderful poem from a wonderful poet... enjoy this sweet victory..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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