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August 11, 2019

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The Virtue of Motion and Life

Rebirth glides -
a bee balm ballerina 
with dainty airs   
sails soft upon enchanted wisps
of Spirit’s blown kiss..
wandering a nectar network  
weaving amid shaggy blooms gilt-tilled..

a dancer in gold dust 
her slipper feet 
of light and peace
bring blessings of fruition
to wild-garden's frilly lavender fillies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 12:08 PM
I am truly impressed, Susan. This goes to show that it's not the length of a poem which counts, but the way it is expressed. In your case you fit all sizes...mini, midi, maxi:) Gershon is a worthy recipient of this delightful dedication! ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
Ashley Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 7:46 PM
Indeed, my dear friend, poetry isn't just a one-size-fits-all affair, one must mix and match, try on different styles. At times, layer with a little more, and other times, dare to bare with a little less :) I have learned from you, Paul, how effective expression in the mini mode can be. I relish your inspiration and your friendship always. Thank you, Paul, your kindness truly goes a long way. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Lindley Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 5:18 AM
A beautiful matching poem for the set my friend. Both dedication poems are shining gems.. A fav.. and another very inspiring piece.
Ashley Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 6:47 PM
Thank you, my dear friend, for your lovely and heartwarming comments. I'm so pleased your enjoyed the dedication, Gershon is a sweet and inspiring poet and friend. Both your kind presence here and the honor of your fav is deeply appreciated, Robert. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Messina Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 6:40 AM
.. of course I had to read this one too! Simply wonderful my friend :)
Ashley Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 11:57 AM
Thank you, Charlieku, for taking the time to read both poems. I truly appreciated your generous spirit and your wonderful comments. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Lovely poem, Susan. Love the magical whimsy of it.
Ashley Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Yes, that was the feeling I was trying to capture, Line. I’m so please it came across that way. Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts and your uplifting comments. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Beautiful verse Susan and a lovely dedication to Gershon. Tom
Ashley Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 10:11 PM
Thank you, Tom, for your lovely comments. Gershon is truly sweet and inspiring, his friendship I treasure. Your kind presence here is deeply appreciated, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 1:57 PM
Aw, I'm brushing away tears right now, Susan. It is such a privilege to be associated with any of your poetic gems, of which this is another in a long, long line. Thank you for pirouetting back to the Soup, O Ballerina! Warm wishes, my dear friend, ~ Gershon
Ashley Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 2:08 PM
You never fail to bring me a bouquet of smiles whenever you visit, Gershon. Thank you for your radiant inspiration and for your shining kindness. I relish your response to my poem and dedication to you. Your generous spirit and your endearing comments are both truly appreciated, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Allison Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 1:52 PM
I have visions of a butterfly dancing on a summer breeze, so beautifully poetic Susan I am sure Gershon will be touched by your dedication too:-) hugs Jan xx
Ashley Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Your insight must be 20/20, Jan :) I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Gershon has a wonderfully generous and poetically expressive spirit.. and he stirred my muse in a such positive way. Thank you for you gracious comments, both you and they are appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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