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The Virgin

undress her slowly be gentle it's her first time a temple yet unexplored pain leads to pleasure if only you take your time yet young men can be anxious moment ends prematurely

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/27/2013 2:14:00 PM
Ooh-la-la, what have we here? lol. It takes me back many, many and a lot more years. Great write aptly titled, Richard. Licia :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2013 2:29:00 PM
Hopefully it was a good memory.
Date: 5/25/2013 12:37:00 AM
hey, way to do a choka!!! Great ending (though not for THEM. haha)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/25/2013 6:12:00 AM
Ha ha, I love your response.
Date: 5/24/2013 11:57:00 PM
The beauty of the moment is in it's brevity. I don't feel very qualified to comment on the majority of romance pieces (even if I do write them on occasion). It's not my forte, but this was well written!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/25/2013 6:14:00 AM
I must say I don't prefer brevity
Date: 5/24/2013 10:20:00 PM
chosen the words beautifully. "Temple yet unexplored" Khama Sutra says, burning incense sticks and flowers to be kept. Nice poem. For u I have written ABC - my first
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/25/2013 6:15:00 AM
I am on my way to check it out
Date: 5/24/2013 8:34:00 PM
Nice poetic form with vivid, realistic expression. I'm glad you didn't get too graphic as Alfred expressed (in his a infinite wisdom) ... total refinement of a very controversial subject. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/25/2013 6:16:00 AM
Ha ha, I am happy to leave out some of the more graphic details.
Date: 5/24/2013 6:58:00 AM
i do have fun from here... lovely structure of poem---winner! ....Elai
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/24/2013 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Elai, I like your name what is your heritage?
Date: 5/24/2013 2:29:00 AM
No one made a comment about Madonna here?.....touched for the very first time.....like a virgin. Oh well, the point being that virginity can be a state of mind as well...or role. Very steamy write! My favorite line here? "A temple yet unexplored!" WOW!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/24/2013 8:00:00 AM
I'm touched for the first time every time. Never gets old!
Date: 5/23/2013 11:57:00 PM
wow.. Richard,, wow.... a virgin... and men with patients... great choka.... Goodnight~ Linda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/24/2013 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 5/23/2013 10:31:00 PM
I hate like HELLo to tell you this is fantastic...but this is fantastic!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2013 11:17:00 PM
Thanks, I'm pleased you like it.
Date: 5/23/2013 7:34:00 PM
Man Richard ...sure have been romantic lately...verynicely done...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2013 11:19:00 PM
Ha ha, must be something in the air, is that spring I smell? Thanks for commenting, I always appreciate your visits.