The View from the Window

Like a picture frame encasing the beauty of the ocean,
the moving curtains wafted by the breeze,
the waters sparkle and blue skies enhance the view.

We found a piece of paradise in this haven of peace.
A well needed rest from the hurly burly of our busy lives. 
Time is slower here, the air is clear and we can breathe again.

The palm outside the window waves to the glistening sea
and brightly coloured birds add to the perfect palette of creation. 
The window like a picture frame depicting utopia.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Roni Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 10:02 AM
A picture frame encapsulates the beauty of the ocean, evoking a sense of peace and renewal. Amazing writing. Congratulations, dear poet. Thank you for sharing.
Radford Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:53 PM
We were on holiday in Antigua and this is that …. Life is normally so frantic ??
Derden Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Beautiful imagery. My poems tend to be a bit darker...or a lot darker...so having a bit of brightness to lighten my view is wonderful.
Radford Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:54 PM
We all need a bit of brightness ??
Farmer Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 4:06 AM
Wow, the imagery puts me right there as I'm reading the lovely words. "the moving curtains wafted by the breeze" - has me sniffing that beachy aroma - an accomplishment - especially since I can't remember the last time I visited an oceanside. I enjoyed reading.
Radford Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Anitugua ?? Back to the grindstone in the UK now ??
Radford Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Nicholsen Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 10:12 AM
What a beautiful write many blessings
Radford Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:57 PM
Thank you ????
Bartley Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Sounds nice. Thanks for sharing!
Radford Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:57 PM
It was! Thank you ??
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