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The View From Here

These eyes the world sifts harshly through, see what I want them to believe. *************** through life glistened eyes glimpses of a desert road… view from a mirage 12 Jul 2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2015 8:09:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Short but sweet..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/21/2015 2:02:00 AM

Congrats on another wonderful win David with this amazing haibun!

Skat A

Date: 8/20/2015 7:28:00 PM

David, Congrats on your HM win. SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2015 5:16:00 PM

lovely to read this again David:-) hugs jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/18/2015 6:56:00 AM

A clever write, and enjoyable read, though for this competition I was looking for more conventional Haibun, with longer, story telling prose. Thank you for entering my competition, but with the quality of other entries I am sorry this piece will not be making the top 20. I will be giving this piece an honourable mention however.

David Mohn
Date: 8/18/2015 8:50:00 AM

Thanks for the thoughtful consideration Scott…I look forward to reading your top choices.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/13/2015 3:14:00 AM

Beautifully penned David the imagery in the haiku is wonderful -I have attempted this form for the first time:-) hugs Jan xx