Get Your Premium Membership

The Victory Dance

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Robert Candler.


The lines "...Effort and dedication will be rewarded
                    They are the 'magic' on your side."   originally reads:

                "...Effort and dedication will be rewarded
                    And Sooner Magic is on your side."   

The line change was made to make the meaning more generically applicable in terms of motivation.  Still, the poem is dedicated to my Oklahoma Sooners, all sports, all athletes. 

Inspired by student athletes in general, but OU Sooners specifically. Those of us who were not student athletes, particularly at the collegiate level, may not have a full understanding or appreciation of the personal sacrifice required to maintain the integrity of your grades AND your dreams.  No...it isn't all about winning, but it is far more than "just a game."  Life lessons are learned...win or lose.  I have often reflected on the character required of athletes who continue to strive and persevere in spite of an obvious impending loss.  An example:  when Tennessee Chattanooga, a division II school, comes to Norman, Oklahoma to play football against the mighty OU Sooners (the most wins and points scored in the modern era of college football), they know the probable outcome; yet they step into a hostile environment and do the best they can until the game is over. Even in losing, that better readies them for life, teaching them to continue despite frustrations and anguish. To apply one's self and maintain focus, despite the situation. Losses are lessons. Learn from them, use them to improve, then put them behind.

Here's to college athletes!  Hoo-ah!

To play as if today Is your only chance. Some say, “It’s just a game.” Have they done the Victory Dance? When hard-earned Victory Was finally at hand, Have they felt the glory Raining down from the stands? To do or not to do…. No one wants to hear, “We tried.” Effort and dedication will be rewarded… They are the magic on your side. Yes, to fall short is still an option; But much better to succeed. Heroes are made and remembered Only by their deeds. So, just go out and win. Give your all to each and every chance. Persevere and achieve… And do the Victory Dance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/21/2017 8:16:00 AM
Poem annotations?
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2016 12:15:00 PM
"no one wants to hear, we tried." That is for sure. Congrats, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 9/7/2014 1:57:00 PM
Dear Mr. Candler, what a great and motivating poem! I am a singer in a small band in Germany. We are working on our debut album at the moment. But we have have little trouble writing lyrics for our songs... That's why I came here. I found this awesome text and instinctively heard a melody in it. Now I want to ask you if you could allow us to make a song of your "Victory Dance"? I'm don't know much about copyright stuff and don't want to steal something. Thanks! Yours sincerely Stefan Krühler
Login to Reply
 Avatar

Date: 10/12/2014 3:54:00 PM
I am so happy to hear that, Mr. Candler! Thank you very much! Thanks also for your replacement of line 12! This makes it a lot easier for us again. I agree with your thoughts about your poems popularity. Reading it, I felt strength and power growing in my bones, even though I don't play football... But words aren't really my thing, as I told before, especially not the english ones. So thank you for this inspiration and a text for a song. We'll let you know, when it's ready!
Candler Avatar
Robert Candler
Date: 9/12/2014 1:12:00 PM
Thank you so much. It is the most successful of all my poems on Poetry Soup, but I've no understanding of why, since it is so sports oriented. In fact, it is a life lesson hidden in a sports oriented motivational poem. I always hope the point will hit someone right between the ears and help them through life. Surely, you would be making some lyric changes. For instance, the reference to "Sooner Magic" would only be understood by a Sooners fans....wouldn't make much sense otherwise. If you replaced that line with "Maybe a little magic is on your side." That might also give the lyric a little more allure, some recognition of unexplainable influences that may or may not affect your life's endeavor or outcome OR is that magic just the result of focus, hard work and dedication. Anyway....blah, blah, blah Feel free to use the lyrics at no current or future cost. I am quite flattered and not in it for the money. Few of us are. Thank you, Stefan.

Book: Shattered Sighs