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Keep faith within yourself for you’re alive. You have no time for tears or thoughts of doubt. You must be the victor and survive. In daily life the hardships do arrive with wondering of how it will turn out. Keep faith within yourself for you’re alive. Oh, with a human effort do you strive your body racked with all emotion's drought. You must be the victor and survive. Fools think that life is all just play and jive having all the swagger and the clout. Keep faith within yourself for you’re alive. As time goes by appreciate the drive. There’ll be some happy days to rave about. You must be the victor and survive. Wishing you a life pass ninety-five. Do not be old and only just a grouch. Keep faith within yourself for you’re alive. You must be the victor and survive. 1/20/20

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Date: 1/31/2020 12:34:00 AM
Words to live by, Janis! Excellent Villanelle Congratulations!!
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Date: 1/20/2020 1:26:00 PM
Hello janis Thompson, this poem is not just for the contest. It is also for my favourite. It has strength. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2020 1:06:00 PM
Yes janis Thompson that is what it is all about. Have a nice day my friend.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/20/2020 1:56:00 PM
Thanks so much for the fave and I am glad that the poem touched you in a personal way. That is what it is all about.

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