Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Rhyme

The Vicissitudes of Modern Air Travel

I relax and sip my martini cruising at 40000 feet.

If only my bags arrive with me, all will be complete

I arrive in Tokyo and watch the carousel go 'round and 'round.

Although it made many circuits, my luggage could not be found!

Here I sit forlorn in the terminal in Tokyo, Japan.

Alas, my shirts and drawers ended up in Kyrgyzstan!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired

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Timothy Hicks April 2, 2016 at 8:05 PM Ooooh the ordeals of flying ... most amusing, Bob. I do believe finding "Kyrgyzstan" in a poem is a first! Heck. I don't think I've EVER heard that word before until now. Robert L. Hinshaw April 3, 2016 at 5:38 PM Correction on your name, Tim (not Time) - my face is red! Robert L. Hinshaw April 3, 2016 at 5:37 PM Thanks, Time - glad you enjoyed. Kyrgystan is one of the many "stans" of countries in the upper mid-east. Take care - bob

Charlie Smith March 5, 2016 at 9:00 PM O' life's ups and downs, wait, that's vicissitudes isn't it? Funny and well done...

Barbara Gorelick March 5, 2016 at 5:30 PM Laughing..only you could rhyme Kyrgyzstan....I will think of this next time I travel....Love ya..BG.