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The Vicar and the Alien

I'm sure the creature fell from outer space; I found a crater with its capsule in - it crawled towards me then, devoid of kin, with tentacles and multi-coloured face. I shouted, 'Welcome to the human race' and thought the waving movements of its limbs  responded to my idea: singing hymns. I sang in tenor, baritone and bass, and said, 'Perhaps you'd like to join my choir?' It seemed to think, but then it gurgled, 'No', and spinning round and round, it flew. The capsule revving up appeared on fire - my alien was surely set to go, and off it went with smoke and sparks of blue... written 21st October for Brian's contest

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Date: 10/24/2020 8:16:00 AM
Not too friendly an alien, but then it could be he was frightened of the human race - I do think that God created other Galaxies besides ours, and it is for us all, to find each other. Lovely write Jack. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 10/23/2020 9:48:00 AM
Is this an Italian sonnet? It sure seems like it. I don't believe I've ever read a sonnet before about an alien nor a vicar. Your originality astounds the mind, and your carefully crafted cadence pleases the ear. Cheers ~ John
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Date: 10/22/2020 6:20:00 PM
Cute one, jACK. I hope ya get a win with Brian!
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Date: 10/22/2020 3:42:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/22/2020 2:16:00 PM
I'm captivated by your creative imagination, Jack...and I like the rhyme scheme, too. Regards // paul
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