Jesse Day Poet Epic

The Very Essense of Your Name

I must have you and all that I want,
Sweet nectar of desire from the spirit of love,
What length for you shall I fight,
For this absolute joy in my life?
You sharpen my sword and offer pure light.

The piercing eyes of the jealous few,
Who wish end of love with absolute rage,
Will never taste your sweetest kiss,
Nor the decadent smile of pure bliss,
You heighten all senses cynics miss.

I can feel my growth inside you,
In spite of all and who block our way,
My heart for you is taken,
From tyranny a force will awaken,
Freedom ... so dearly we shall not forsaken -
The very essence of your name.
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Form: Epic
Contest Entry: Your Best (premiere) number one 
Sponsor: Skat A
Results: 10th Place
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Michael Dom July 18, 2016 at 1:50 AM Aye, what's in a name? Nothing for the faint of heart. Jesse Day July 18, 2016 at 7:23 AM Agreed - thanks for reading and commenting. Jesse

Sandra Haight July 16, 2016 at 8:44 PM A powerful poem, Jesse. Congratulations on your fine win in this Premiere Contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra Jesse Day July 17, 2016 at 6:47 AM Thank you for reading and your comments! Jesse

Skat A July 16, 2016 at 8:26 PM Hi, Jesse. Thank you for the support. Congratulations on your win. I have a part time nlog if you want to stop by. Skat Jesse Day July 17, 2016 at 6:48 AM Thank you for adding me to your list of winners! Jesse

Becca Teagan June 2, 2016 at 8:49 AM An epic poem! I love it. Jesse Day June 6, 2016 at 9:45 AM Thanks! I added epic in the description - Jesse

Poet Destroyer A May 31, 2016 at 1:42 AM enjoyed your read Jesse, thank you for sharing:)... ~Linda~ Jesse Day June 6, 2016 at 9:42 AM Thank you - my pleasure. - Jesse

Joyce Johnson May 28, 2016 at 7:58 PM Welcome Jesse to our corner and thank you for reading and commenting. Good luck in the contest Love, Joyce Jesse Day June 6, 2016 at 9:41 AM Thank you as well for reading and commenting - Jesse

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2016 at 2:33 PM - A wonderful poem that you can be proud of, Jesse - I wish you a blessed weekend - hugs //Sun :) Jesse Day May 28, 2016 at 3:51 PM Thank you, Sun - your words are always supportive to the effort. Bless you and your weekend as well! - Jesse

Jesse Day May 28, 2016 at 2:06 PM Proud of this one!