The Verdict Is In

Troubled Times of Turmoil Coming back around again Curses; always foiled! My agonized and worried Brain! Like an Army of Needles- Poking; prodding! As Agents of Evil, Laughing; applauding! Stabbing every inch of me- Tear my flesh; scar my Soul Cannot run; cannot flee! Leave me raw; leave me exposed! Find me G-U-I-L-T-Y Mind is F-I-L-T-H-Y Kill me Q-U-I-C-K-L-Y *Another old experimental piece I found

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/2/2013 6:59:00 PM

Chan GEESH !!!! What is with the dark and creepy poem. You are scaring me. LOL Nice job Thanks for the insightful comment on my Love Drives Me Insane poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/3/2013 10:05:00 AM

It is quite dark and creepy, I agree lol Thanks for the read, Sweet Pea! <3

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/4/2013 12:27:00 PM

I like this poem in that it is very L-O-U-D! What a creative mind!..JM

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/4/2013 3:54:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph; it's a definite departure from my usual style. I appreciate the read and reply, always :)