The Verb As a Volt

The verb, when well wired,
acts as a unit of electrical potential 
equal to the difference between two sparks of meaning
on a graduated scale of question marks,
carrying a constant current of one impact.
When poetic power charges the space
between the thought and the word
there is a jolt,
and a vault from an ought
to a fact.

In the right hands
a marvelous toy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nibert Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 10:41 AM
enigmatic / good soup
Macmillan Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 8:10 PM
:) Playful! Like this... verbs make or break a poem, but I'm finally relaxing my grip on poetry enough to slip in one adverb, a sprinkle of adjectives... and there is also power in the precise noun, yes, in 'exactness?' Cheers!
Howe Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Thank you very much, Cyndi. I'm trying to pay more attention to diction. I seem to be verb. I like the sprinkle of adjectives you mention. Like Italian Dressing on a salad. Cheers.
Gupta Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 5:29 AM
Very nicely said ... The greater potential difference a poet creates the better a reader can get ... of course with the charge ... Well done ...
Howe Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Thank you Probir. I am honored that you read my poem.
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