The Velvet Spiral
Here's a fact:
When you doubt the abstract
You tend to react
A little less
To the bliss
That is finesse.
And just because
It has some flaws
You don't pause!
You become fickle
And you don't give a nickel
Whether you should cry or tickle.
But in order to excel
To be caught under the spell
You must first decide to dwell
Where your mind is at peace
So that you may release
Your thoughts, and you cease
To be trapped
And your mind will be wrapped
Around your heart then "snap!"
You are caught in the velvet spiral
So full of devotion
It contaminates you infinitely viral
And casts away matter...
To make room for emotion
Copyright © Gael Attal | Year Posted 2009
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