Notes About The Poem

The Magic of a Sunset. The story behind the beauty of sunrise… | by Anne  Bonfert | Live Your Life On Purpose | Medium

The Velvet Hour

Dusk spreads its dark, dusky fingers, dipping slowly into the tranquil indigo water.
Shifting shadows creep between the frothy, white-capped waves on the shore.
The burning metallic gold fades as the scenery turns to lavender and deep violet.
Silhouettes of trees trap the remaining color, storing the final pigments in black.
The earth falls asleep, rocked by the wind and embraced by the coming twilight.
The air turns cool, and the first star emerges to witness the end of the day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gibbons Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 12:59 PM
Loved this so much I especially loved ' the first star emerges ' also' earth falls asleep rocked by the wind ' fabulous imagery throughout William.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 1:42 PM
That is awesome, my friend, thanks for the highlights.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 2:02 PM
Pretty imagery, William!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 2:21 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace