Date: Dec 03, 2023
Contest Name: Pick a Title Volume 40
Contest Sponser: Edward Ibeh
The Vanity of Pleasure Temptation tingles I was confused by my desire I believed the sensual was transcendent Rising as I did on the waves of want Seduced by skin a wanton whisper A Goddess wrapped in cellophane Eyes that made me weak in my knees Feather soft fingertips Sweet supple lips Screams of delight Slipping into tunnels tight A train on a fast track Her beneath me on her back She fed my erupting ego Made me feel like a man I was less somehow but more than my awkward self First time fast Captivated by her cyclone power An attraction distraction One that could never fulfil Like trying to extract happy from a pill My vanity insanity exercising of my free will Her name not known Me just a bit part in her play The 17 year old kid That pleasure whisked away.
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