The Vampire

When darkness fell, he came awake
And readied for the night ahead
Clambering out of his pine box
This coffin forever his bed

Shade from sunlight and prying eyes
His secret was well hidden too
“hind the wall in the manor house 
He was the only one who knew

For centuries, he prowled this earth 
A living man who became cursed 
To prey upon humanity 
Thus quenching his eternal thirst 

He craved warm blood from pulsing veins 
He feared the peasants would soon know 
Hearing cries echo in the night
His victims’ lifeblood ebbing low

Hating himself for those he killed
No recourse but to carry on 
Survival was his first concern 
He would pass another eon

Before he took another step 
The yells of town folk reached his ears
The door broke in, the torches blazed
It was the sum of all his fears

By dawn the house had burned away 
The town folk could breathe calm once more
For they had burned the hellish ghoul
The evil creature of past lore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/17/2017 9:02:00 AM
So great and excellent. Three words underrating this magnificient piece which has dragged my mind in the viscose silk of awe to really lack what to say. A definite 7 friend.
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Date: 6/12/2017 3:06:00 PM
Very nicely done Madeleine, This was creative and creepy.
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Madeleine Riha
Date: 6/12/2017 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Chris. I had fun writing it.
Date: 6/12/2017 10:35:00 AM
Very vivid description of the Dracula story Perosnally I would categorise it as rhyme as it is not a pantoum form:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Jan. I changed it to Rhyme.
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