The Valley of Loss

Dried up in the dusted remnants of life within Now in the deserted valley of my echoes hollow Powdered flakes caught up within the wind again Leaving no trace for the no one who will never follow Vacantly running absent in a profound sense of loss Lost in isolation in this world that does not exist Pain washes through the dirty streets in resemblance Of the way this became something not able to resist Here in this dwelling living in lack of self awareness Drawing dusty doodles of the caverns in my heart Wind shows no mercy in the sweeping of our souls All the ones that remained here choosing to fall apart No guides, no maps, no directions on how to escape Soon you won't even be able to remember your name So deeper willing to fall down into the tides of darkness Drowning in pools of loss while still burning with shame
11/09/17 Written for contest: "Empty Your Soul" Hosted by: Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 3:57 PM
Very intense and meaningful write, Brian, and I enjoyed it thoroughly all the way. I have found much beauty in the darkness, and much healing writing dark poetry ... I get the feeling you know what I mean. Wonderful write! Congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - blessings!
Davey Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 4:31 PM
Yes I do agree with you I tend to write my best work in the darker realm which in life most of us can relate more to, we'll at least I can. Thank you for your comments they are always well received
La France Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Brian, like you poem a lot, no guides, no maps, no directions... that is so true of life, congratulations on your win in my contest !
Davey Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Thank you for your kindness, guidance, and for putting together another get contest
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