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Oh, in inspirations winter dreaming, I’ve dream't Of a mystic valley of the Aurora Borealis, A chambered realm of frozen colors, Exploding within reflected light aglow, In the hushed silence of ice and snow. Here the pondering thoughts are set from beyond Limitations of realities boundaries. I'm a poet on a free fall dive, into the human imagination, Behold my polarized world of enchantment. Tender are the delicate wildflower petals, Gleaming beneath the frozen sun, ice blossoms adornments, Brilliantly shining in the fields of glitter, amongst The snow dust's razzle-dazzle, beguiling the eyes of this poetic Heart. A Floral tapestry of permafrost, drips with a frothy moisture Mist of sleet, creating a dappling effect upon the white Dandelions and ivory daisies. Taste the frozen honeysuckle upon your lips of warmth, As the swarming frost bees pollinate this arctic garden, Stinging with their chilling venom of flash freezing. Palest crystallized roses, with thorny prongs sharpened edges, Embraces the colds icy light, but reject the soft touch of The mortal hands of loves devotion. The haunting sounds of the Arctic owl echoes, against the Walls of these alpine fiord's, as waterfalls of avalanches, Crashes downwards, cascading into the deep valley basin below. Swirling arctic foam blasts across this translucent terrain, Shattering the magical splendor of stillness, And splintering the tender reed unto nothingness, Except for the spreading of germination's life giving Seeds of renewal. Yet it leaves refineries thin fluffy powder, scattered for The crystal humming birds, it is their sweet nectar’s Refreshment to feast upon, as the swift wings sparkle, In the dusk's afternoons setting sun last rays. Welcome to my symphony of Tiffany, gems stones sacred Meadow of frozen jewels, radiating luster's regalia Of glitz and glamour, leaving behind a twinkling celestial display, That comes from a rich imagination of a poetic heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/30/2015 7:42:00 PM
WOW, Cherl, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:46:00 PM
Cheryl, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2015 9:06:00 PM
This is a great write Cherl. The picture is amazing. A lot of thought went into this poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/27/2015 7:27:00 PM
Oh my goodness, Cheryl, I can see that you put your heart and soul into every line of this imaginative piece !! Congratulations on your win !! Bravo!
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:49:00 PM
Very beautiful as always Cherl, your discriptive abilities are marvelous a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/27/2015 8:19:00 AM
Your discriptive abilities are marvelous! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 1/13/2015 3:36:00 PM
I see that you like the freedom of free verse also. We need more of that on PoetrySoup. Rhyming sometimes stifles expression.
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Date: 12/17/2014 6:16:00 PM
very beautifully painted as always cheryl dear friend
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Date: 12/14/2014 12:47:00 PM
WOW... Talk about imagery , very astute and beautifully put.. I love this one Cheril.. Especially ":Palest crystallized roses, with thorny prongs sharpened edges, Embraces the colds icy light, but reject the soft touch of The mortal hands of loves devotion." Amazing!!! LOVE IT ! Great job! ~Joel
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Date: 12/12/2014 10:25:00 AM
I enjoyed the tour of the frozen beautiful Aurora valley . . . filled with love and light. I used to watch this night time show when I was a boy but now living in Texas I don't get to see it. You made my morning bright and wonderful. All the best.
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Date: 12/12/2014 5:46:00 AM
You present a vision that sets the mind to imagination and pleasure. An icy fairy tale so to speak. One that rests in a poet's heart! Definite 7 on this fine poem and a joy to read this morn.
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Date: 12/12/2014 3:16:00 AM
- Yes, really: "That comes from a rich imagination of a poetic heart." - Enjoy reading this Cherl - A truly wonderful poem, thank you my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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