The Valence of Awareness

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Inner polarity sparks an echoic consciousness. 
Ecstasy magnetically undermines selflessness. 
Soundlessness indicates process stabilization. 
Every breath spawns inner veiled polarization.

Proceed forward, but remember those left behind. 
Your imperfections jostle you powerful and kind. 
Life is about seizing odds that fit you as a glove. 
Severe blasts don't stop us from embracing love.

Tender hearts, fragile souls, no way to console. 
Angels with damaged dreams and torn souls 
They were confident in their nefarious sadness. 
Still, eyes plead for passion, risking brashness.

Intuitive growth starts until the ego is shed. 
Desires were omitted, and joy tulips spread. 
As we're living, our dreams are in abundance. 
Give without asking, be ardent for acceptance.

Fear-grazed pastures cannot be assessed. 
Builds, full of grim views, as if souls possessed. 
If we do not serve the poor, we may cry later. 
Gaunt chances to boost happiness greater.

Compassion is hated and rudeness is kindness. 
Goodness is altered to fallaciousness in darkness. 
Mercy vents wrath and money leads to poverty. 
For wet, it's sly, and for peace, there's hostility.

Greed and delusion must be escaped. 
Because of the love, nature's vibe is raped. 
The most fundamental question in life is 
how do you cope with other people's fizz?

Bear me close, but do not squeeze too hard. 
Be conciliatory, yet avow a stand-and-guard. 
Never hide the truth when relating a story. 
Relish your day while expecting aging glory.

Acute consciousness is vital for progress. 
People can move as rapidly as the tigress.
Consider your ambiance when casting high. 
Be ascetic and truthful, and gaze at the sky.

Somehow, send a tender if faith is slender. 
Run faster, never despair, and never surrender. 
We witness angels and devils in this world. 
Yet, the arms of equity appeared undeterred.

There is brightness where there is darkness. 
Because polarity is a severe law of existence, 
there is hatred for love and delight for sorrow. 
For every yesterday, there is surely a tomorrow.

Hinder what you need and discard the rest. 
Honor what you own; be glad for the best. 
Light is flowing while gloom is creeping. 
Shattered memories prorogue on leaping.


Written: October 29, 2022

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