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The Vacancy

Slowly my world shatters Unravelling all around me Inside my heart is Cold, empty, broken I have fallen apart completely Drowning in the waves of sorrow Everything I once was is swept away By Morgan Mise Written November 13, 2012

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/10/2013 4:21:00 PM

I know the feeling. Good poem - JH

John Posey

Date: 1/8/2013 8:53:00 PM

Great acrostic poem... It would be tragic should something foolish take such talent from us.... Stay and let us show you love...Jake

Morgan Mise
Date: 1/8/2013 8:57:00 PM

I'm staying :) thanks Jake. Morgan.

Curt Mongold

Date: 1/8/2013 8:19:00 PM

I agree, the fuel for writing often comes from our darkest moments in life. If you think about doing it, that's fine, but if you do it, I'm afraid I'll have to kick your butt. (lol) Life is too precious to end before it's time my friend. Always hang in there, and write it all out.

Morgan Mise
Date: 1/8/2013 8:38:00 PM

Haha I wont. It was a month ago or so and I'm doing better. And agree, life is too precious.

Sarah Sublett

Date: 1/8/2013 7:31:00 PM

Sometimes our world feels like this, but it will get better. I've been the lowest of low and can relate to this poem. Good write.

Morgan Mise
Date: 1/8/2013 7:33:00 PM

I agree completely. Our darkest and happiest feelings can fuel life to our writing. And Thanks.