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The Urging

Impulse of passion Breeze in rapture of petals Stolen kisses dance Limbs fall akimbo Dark eyes lazily flutter Tresses swirl outward Tango fills the air Rolling frolic pirouettes Beyond lovers' bliss Heartbeats entangle Pheromones perfume rouge cheeks. Trance dancers retreat.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 2/9/2010 10:26:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem ... I want the urge to echo to the end

L'Nass Shango

Date: 2/9/2010 10:25:00 AM

When you redo this make the second and the last yield two more verses from the themselves ... they have twin in them panting for light.

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/7/2010 12:26:00 PM

Deborah, Hello hon. I hope all is well with you these days. Excellent write. Love the word use in this piece, God Bless you always, YF4L, mj

Brian Strand

Date: 2/7/2010 12:46:00 AM

Lots of pace here Debbie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and Kind words.

John Freeman

Date: 2/6/2010 10:21:00 PM

Oh so the pheromone is in the perfume now days? That's what in the air. Lol! Excellent job Deb, Sincerely, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2010 9:57:00 AM

Interesting passionate write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Olajide Adelana

Date: 2/5/2010 3:03:00 PM

This really tugged out my heart strings, lol I love this piece before u start writing it

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/5/2010 10:37:00 AM

Awwwwwwwww this is absolutely precious Deborah. Thank you for sharing such a lovely write today. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/5/2010 10:29:00 AM

i see a senorita with a rose in her teeth dancing. john

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/5/2010 7:49:00 AM

Ahhhhh..........so lovely....descriptions are heavenly...

Brian Strand

Date: 2/5/2010 7:24:00 AM

Thank you for your blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

Date: 2/4/2010 11:25:00 PM

Thank you for your blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2010 8:53:00 PM

Luv Luv Luv this Debbie and the title is terrific... your words flow like love itself... great write ... thankxxx for the info on the book and your congrats on my poetry wins.. appreciate very much ... this one is truly a special "beauty"...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/4/2010 8:27:00 PM

Awesome work, the descriptions in the meter are nicely done...Raul

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/4/2010 5:44:00 PM

sounds like a dream,...a lovely lover's dream. Just got to learn how to do these Chokas. Very nice Deborah. -Robert