The Urging

Impulse of passion
Breeze in rapture of petals
Stolen kisses dance 

Limbs fall akimbo
Dark eyes lazily flutter
Tresses swirl outward 

Tango fills the air
Rolling frolic pirouettes
Beyond lovers' bliss

Heartbeats entangle
Pheromones perfume rouge cheeks.
Trance dancers retreat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/9/2010 10:26:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem ... I want the urge to echo to the end
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Date: 2/9/2010 10:25:00 AM
When you redo this make the second and the last yield two more verses from the themselves ... they have twin in them panting for light.
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:26:00 PM
Deborah, Hello hon. I hope all is well with you these days. Excellent write. Love the word use in this piece, God Bless you always, YF4L, mj
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:46:00 AM
Lots of pace here Debbie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and Kind words.
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Date: 2/6/2010 10:21:00 PM
Oh so the pheromone is in the perfume now days? That's what in the air. Lol! Excellent job Deb, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/6/2010 9:57:00 AM
Interesting passionate write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/5/2010 3:03:00 PM
This really tugged out my heart strings, lol I love this piece before u start writing it
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:37:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww this is absolutely precious Deborah. Thank you for sharing such a lovely write today. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:29:00 AM
i see a senorita with a rose in her teeth dancing. john
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:49:00 AM
Ahhhhh..........so lovely....descriptions are heavenly...
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:24:00 AM
Thank you for your blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/4/2010 11:25:00 PM
Thank you for your blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:53:00 PM
Luv Luv Luv this Debbie and the title is terrific... your words flow like love itself... great write ... thankxxx for the info on the book and your congrats on my poetry wins.. appreciate very much ... this one is truly a special "beauty"...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:27:00 PM
Awesome work, the descriptions in the meter are nicely done...Raul
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Date: 2/4/2010 5:44:00 PM
sounds like a dream,...a lovely lover's dream. Just got to learn how to do these Chokas. Very nice Deborah. -Robert
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