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The Unwise (2005)

I heard her words, I closed my eyes, Became so lost, so unwise. Opened up, to let her in. The space, the sound, the retched din. I sunk my teeth, I bled her dry. Drained the tears, watching her cry, evapourating, she disolves. turning tables, to so I evolve.

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Date: 5/27/2009 10:25:00 AM
form rhyme....bloodless title again my naomi....try Bled Dry or Retched Din or Watch Her Cry...Light & Love
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