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The Unwavering Sentinel

The beam amidst the raging storm Like a glum buffalo of fierceness The seemingly engulfing clouds The furious and pounding waves As if a treacherous leviathan Ever menacing yet perilous Lo and behold, the sentinel Stand still amidst the dicey phase The beam remained unwavering Static and prompt to repress Non-submissive yet resistance Such is a sentinel of vastness
Date written 04/10/16 An entry to "Sentinel" Quatrain Poetry Contest 4th placer An entry for Laura Loo's contest "Any Poem Written in April 2016"

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Date: 6/15/2016 2:03:00 PM
I enjoyed and absorbed your words and thoughts on this one. You have a power with this work that is admirable. Congrats on this one!
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Date: 4/26/2016 12:44:00 AM
A larger than life read... Enjoyed your win, Moon Flower. Linda
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Date: 4/25/2016 9:48:00 AM
GREAT PIECE MY FRIEND.. I SEE IT PLACED IN A CONTEST, CONGRATS..A7
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Moon Flower
Date: 4/25/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, for the kind words and for the awesome rate. ;)
Date: 4/16/2016 12:45:00 PM
Hi Moon Flower, congratulations on your win for your 'Sentinel' poem. Wonderful imagery of the 'unwavering sentinel' standing strong against the raging storm! Hugs, Sandra
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Moon Flower
Date: 4/18/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Sandra. You're so humble. Congrats too on your top win on this. ;). Hugs.
Date: 4/10/2016 9:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it........A.M.
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Moon Flower
Date: 4/10/2016 9:19:00 PM
Glad that you did enjoy reading. Thanks A.M.
Date: 4/10/2016 8:27:00 AM
Great interpretation of the photo Moon. Good luck! Peace my friend:)
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Moon Flower
Date: 4/10/2016 9:18:00 PM
Thank you my friend Daniel. GL too. :)

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