The Unusual Ballad of Lily and Pierre

The Unusual Ballad of Lily and Pierre

Feline Lily strolled one day
and behold who did she see,
Pierre, the Tom cat of her dreams 
under a cherry tree.

She gazed at him, he winked at her
from that day it was their plight,
they were destined for each other
it was true love at first sight
.
She admired his wiry long black hair
on his back a white stripe too,
but she had one little problem
she didn't know what to do.
In certain situations 
at any time or given day,
he sprayed a putrid odor
that seemed to never go away.

She didn't know how to tell him
that he really stunk,
and he didn't know to tell her
that he actually was a skunk.

Lily couldn't bear to leave him
and so the story goes, 
she chose to wear a clothespin
daily on her nose.

I guess the lesson learned here,
whatever flaws you think you've got,
true love can rise and overcome
WHETHER
you're a skunk or not.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 29, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Liz, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... Love Linda
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July 29, 2014 at 3:21 PM
Thank you very much Linda
Nance Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:39 PM
aww great story!
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July 27, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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July 27, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Laughing out loud, Liz. Awesome poem! Congrats on your top spot. Best wishes, Carolyn
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July 27, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Thank you so much :)
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:26 AM
Great moral...lovely story...congrats Tim
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July 27, 2014 at 1:07 PM
Thank you :)
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July 27, 2014 at 7:02 AM
Wonderful write Liz! Congrats on top win!
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July 27, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Thank you very much :)
Mehta Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Interesting write with lovely humor, Liuz. congrats
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July 27, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Thank you very much :)
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 8:31 PM
Congrats on a great win, Liz, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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July 27, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Thanks so much :)
Gorelick Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 5:21 PM
So cute...the clothespin line made me laugh.. congrats on your win. BG
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July 27, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Thank you. I'm glad it gave you a laugh :)
Allison Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:17 AM
Hilarious write made me chuckle. Hugs Jan xx
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July 27, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Thank you. I'm glad it made you laugh. :)
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July 17, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Thank you for reading! :)
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