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The Untitled Show - Zanila Rhyme

Ironic lost in mimes parody The world stumbling upside down  Stand aside, cast from the audience Be witness of pranked pathetic clown  Ironic fill the taste, yet swallow Your world brings life bitter sweet Cast from the audience, stand aside Intoxicate like ripe berries, squeezed  Ironic in what comes between us We speak  like no yesterday Stand aside, cast from the audience Seek for sense which left the other day Ironic to end this poetry Muse sets spot in dark chamber Cast from the audience, stand aside Red curtain fallen, show is over January 4, 2013 ZaniLa Rhyme - an exiting new contest for the holidays... Free Poetry Contest Sponsor Suzette Crous

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Date: 1/8/2013 6:10:00 AM
Hey Yanny, this is a deep poem. I like the use of this form and might try it myself too. Cheers!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/8/2013 6:32:00 AM
Let me know if you finish it one, I will gladly and eagerly to read yours :D cheers mike :D
Date: 1/7/2013 7:40:00 AM
Great write here. Loved reading it. Good luck for the contest. :-)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/7/2013 4:50:00 PM
Thank you Menhaz, your comment always uplifting :)
Date: 1/6/2013 1:04:00 AM
I feel intoxicated by your words, you have a way of drawing the reader into your strange yet magical world. Good luck with the contest Yanny. Hugs Rick Thanks for letting me dedicate my poem to you. I will let you know when the book is out.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/6/2013 11:25:00 PM
Looking forward for your book Richard :D, and thank you for the poem which you dedicated to me, it's being an honor for me :) - hug, yanny
Date: 1/5/2013 7:41:00 AM
Love this Yanny love it is well worth the five re-reads I have given it already and it's due some more. xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/5/2013 7:53:00 AM
Really you read it for 5 times? Wow Mandy if you did, I love you so much! :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/4/2013 6:53:00 PM
Nice to read you this evening. Light & Love
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/4/2013 6:56:00 PM
Thank you Debbie, it's a pleasure to have you here as well :D

Book: Shattered Sighs