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The Untitled Show - Zanila Rhyme

Ironic lost in mimes parody
The world stumbling upside down 
Stand aside, cast from the audience
Be witness of pranked pathetic clown 

Ironic fill the taste, yet swallow
Your world brings life bitter sweet
Cast from the audience, stand aside
Intoxicate like ripe berries, squeezed 

Ironic in what comes between us
We speak  like no yesterday
Stand aside, cast from the audience
Seek for sense which left the other day

Ironic to end this poetry
Muse sets spot in dark chamber
Cast from the audience, stand aside
Red curtain fallen, show is over

January 4, 2013
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Michael Dom

Date: 1/8/2013 6:10:00 AM

Hey Yanny, this is a deep poem. I like the use of this form and might try it myself too. Cheers!

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/8/2013 6:32:00 AM

Let me know if you finish it one, I will gladly and eagerly to read yours :D cheers mike :D

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/7/2013 7:40:00 AM

Great write here. Loved reading it. Good luck for the contest. :-)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/7/2013 4:50:00 PM

Thank you Menhaz, your comment always uplifting :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2013 1:04:00 AM

I feel intoxicated by your words, you have a way of drawing the reader into your strange yet magical world. Good luck with the contest Yanny. Hugs Rick Thanks for letting me dedicate my poem to you. I will let you know when the book is out.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/6/2013 11:25:00 PM

Looking forward for your book Richard :D, and thank you for the poem which you dedicated to me, it's being an honor for me :) - hug, yanny