The Unrequited Mantra

Do you still love me? 
You asked as we spooned in the night.
I will always love you, I replied.
Again you asked, 
Do you still love me?
And again my reply,
I will always love you, 
...comforted by the feelings aroused by the chant.

More than a cry for love; more than a promise
An incanted mantra, an affirmation, a prayer
A reassuring echo to your heart’s ping
A shared moment of truth…
…or only a truth in the moment, a moment passed.

We don’t hold each other in the night any more, 
for that was a decade ago…in this life.
And yet, here in my heart the echo continues, 
...still answering the now silent ping.

In moment after moment of an eternal unshared truth,
I will always love you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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A   Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:25 PM
Linda, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:00 PM
I'm reviewing poems I have faved at Soup and noticing you have been missing from Poetry soup. Sure would like to see you enter this golden olide into my current contest. All entries I've faved are winners. the contest will close fast. I hope you are well. Luv, Andrea
Spence Sr Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 7:05 AM
This is a real world poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. The imagery is quite vivid. Great job! Joseph
Sweetheart Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Congrats Linda on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to feature and share...luv.. Linda-Marie..
Freeman Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 9:04 PM
Congratulations on your poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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March 23, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Love can be like that...until one finally is able to love again...and maybe longer. Congratulations Linda, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
Dufresne Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 1:11 PM
Loved this one Linda since it's conception. Congrats again ...Glad it got a little more lime light.-Robert
Locke Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 9:43 AM
This is really moving Linda. Well done on being featured, well deserved!
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Linda. Love, Carol
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March 22, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!
Fisher Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Many congrats on your deserved featured piece. Rgds Janette
Bono Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 7:36 PM
Very well written.I liked.I also stopped by to say hi and hope all is well with you.
Ryerson Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Beautiful love poem, Linda!...You are very talented and I'm looking forward to reading more...Also thanks so much for your kind comment on 'Gaurdian Angels'...Very encouraging! I will certainly look up that web-site you mentioned! - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Linda, I came here to read the last poem of yours I can find to read and to tell you how wonderful you are doing for a a month-old poet, and I stumble on this REALLY great piece. It is poignanat. It is grand. It is going to my favs. Luv,Andrea ps. Now you are doing baby steps. Experiment with forms. And soon you will be running and filling up this club with poetry.
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January 16, 2010 at 1:10 PM
this was so..... intrestingly truthful for love that pass the test of time. as for the cure i suppose the art of forgiveness and submissiveness will have to be employed. i like the subjectes you use, John H. Loving III
Guzzi Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Most excellent and heartfelt write...unassuming but proud and warm! Light & Love
George   Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 2:51 AM
This is gorgeous! Such a rendering of soft and un-dying love. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent, Linda, and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie
Clark Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 1:05 PM
Ahhhh Linda, Thank you for your confirmation of betrayal! Only one who has been there recognizes the the black hole! Thank You! And Best Wishes..Very nice write and I believe this never goes away.... Jeralynn
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January 11, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Hi Linda! read your nice poem again.Soup mail Robert
Bono Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Just stopping by to say hello.Hope all is well and thank you for everything.
Dufresne Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 6:34 AM
looking forward to more poems from your own heart, Linda. Thank you for your thoughtful comment on my free verse. God bless you. Robert
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December 27, 2009 at 1:31 PM
Thank you for your comment, Robert. I love this poem, my first born. It's been almost therapeutic for me to give voice to these feelings, especially here. As I read through others' poems, including your own precious renderings, I've come to appreciate what an extraordinary venue this is...and an amazing community of souls who witness and encourage one another.
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December 27, 2009 at 12:51 PM
Hi Linda, beautiful poem here! Kudos on the success of putting thoughts and feelings to words. yup ,mind heart and memory coming together to as you say "give birth to this poem." That feeling of nakedness is there sometimes depending how deep down you reahed for the poem. At least that's my experience.enjoyed. -Robert
Bono Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 7:29 AM
Thank you for sharing.
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December 18, 2009 at 12:44 AM
I appreciate your comment, Carol. This being my first posting, it's been an interesting process. A part of me was the observer as the poem gestated then emerged; another part of me actually wrote the thing...birthed it, if you will. If not purely left brain and right brain, there is definitely dual parentage going on there. And as in giving birth to a child, there is the feeling of nakedness, of being so intimately exposed. Does everyone have that experience when writing poetry?
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