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The Unquote Promise

It was night when I saw you in my dreams Dreams that shattered into pieces Pieces of our memories and hearts Hearts that seems so tired to follow our rules. The scorching sun at noon burnt my soul Soul that lied and cheated amidst your honesty Honesty that once part of you and me together Together, in any parts of this whole wide world is nowhere to be found. Everyone wakes up in the morning of bliss Bliss which means sorrow Sorrow of every single mistake I've done to you You whose love, patience and care matches no one that I am longing until now. I am now staring at the moon. Moon that reminds me as a fragile Fragile person should blame no one but myself Myself who made an unquote promise to a woman I lost forever.

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Date: 12/11/2024 9:44:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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