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The Unknown

I see radiant mist from a spaceship window spinning through planets and colossal stars Milky white lights and colored psychedelia, infinite dark captured in a telescope camera. An oscillation of vastness in laws of Physics dwindled a miniscule ego, into nothingness. Like protons and electrons, in resonant spin I see aesthetic of symmetry effortlessly win. I don't even try to understand the Unknown There's a known Universe... when I'm all alone. 6th July 2019 Sponsor Nina Parmenter Contest Name The Universe

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/6/2019 6:09:00 AM

"Like protons and electrons, in resonant spin I see aesthetic of symmetry effortlessly win." Your well-built poem made me smile today. Your word choices admirable! Well done!

Debjani Mitra
Date: 7/6/2019 7:48:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear Caren

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/6/2019 4:07:00 AM

Love it, Debjani.

Debjani Mitra
Date: 7/6/2019 5:57:00 AM

Thanks so much dear, you are so liberal in applauding