The Universe

Plethora of life
In every shape and form
A vibrancy interconnected
Orchestrated covertly
Mystifying and mysterious
Wondrously grandiose
The enigmatic cosmos 



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on December 18, 2019 for contest STRAND SPECIAL 5 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  HONORABLE MENTION
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Ashley Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 11:31 PM
Wonderfully done, Line. Such vibrancy! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 11:36 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Laurie Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Hello Line … to look up into the night sky you see wonders, but have little idea what they are. A nice verse Line to have me thinking of the mystery above us - thank you Line - Lindsay
Gauthier Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 8:57 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Lindsay.
Sergi Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Seven lines beautifully creating an enigma of the universe! good Luck, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Thank you so much, Ralph. Much appreciated.
Adams Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 11:32 AM
nicely penned Line, good luck in the contest :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Nicely done, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:03 AM
You have described the cosmos well. Good luck in the contest. Every word has such a profound effect on the rest of the poem, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:05 AM
Thanks, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Michael Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 5:40 AM
The great intelligence...an operating system...you described it well...
Gauthier Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 6:42 AM
Thanks, Arturo, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
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