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The Universe

Plethora of life In every shape and form A vibrancy interconnected Orchestrated covertly Mystifying and mysterious Wondrously grandiose The enigmatic cosmos AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on December 18, 2019 for contest STRAND SPECIAL 5 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION and on July 1, 2019 for contest THE UNIVERSE sponsored by NINA PARMENTER

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Date: 7/2/2019 11:31:00 PM
Wonderfully done, Line. Such vibrancy! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/2/2019 11:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/2/2019 8:13:00 PM
Hello Line … to look up into the night sky you see wonders, but have little idea what they are. A nice verse Line to have me thinking of the mystery above us - thank you Line - Lindsay
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/2/2019 8:57:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Lindsay.
Date: 7/2/2019 3:47:00 PM
Seven lines beautifully creating an enigma of the universe! good Luck, Line!
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Date: 7/2/2019 4:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ralph. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/2/2019 11:32:00 AM
nicely penned Line, good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/2/2019 11:50:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/2/2019 7:53:00 AM
Nicely done, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/2/2019 11:50:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/2/2019 7:03:00 AM
You have described the cosmos well. Good luck in the contest. Every word has such a profound effect on the rest of the poem, Line.
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Date: 7/2/2019 7:05:00 AM
Thanks, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/2/2019 5:40:00 AM
The great intelligence...an operating system...you described it well...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/2/2019 6:42:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

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