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The Unfinished

bare wood, plain steel, fresh-fired clay what is left lying around and about the ream of handwritten novel notes dangling conversations, what can I say lives transcending their meaning without the human errors, mistakes, misquotes that were wanted to straighten and correct the second chances, opportunities missed if we could do all that we had desired but left in hindsight are only circumspect the bucket things we've left off the list forget all the junk that had transpired would we then go gently into that night the importance of all the parts unfinished at the final analysis just doesn't matter maybe exiting the stage without stage fright without final polish somehow undiminished those things unsaid, some unfinished chatter things mattered more back then in the middle now freed of life to freely speak mind simply felt simply known and simply said things before, more of a Gordian riddle so the rope is cut, such a tenuous line things left unfinished to simply go ahead © Goode Guy 2011-06-01 for a friend

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Date: 6/2/2011 11:26:00 AM
Is there a new moon or what? Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Goode Guy. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 2:48:00 AM
So good, love, it Goode Guy. Thanks for emailing me and corrected my poem. I feel very appreciated. But the first line, I still confirm...it'a avowal, not a vowel. But yes, soul is a missspelling. You are very very kind and I learn a great deal your works...thanks again
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