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The Unequal Distribution of Sunset

The spires take a patchwork of blonds, The pavements, a not-so-shiny copper, To the harbour go a few drops of bronze, Even clouds get but a listless amber, Though when long day is growing old, The sun, parting, never forgets to rain On you, on no other, a splurge of gold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/1/2019 8:14:00 PM
Splendid and romantic! Lovely done. x
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Bernard Chan
Date: 5/2/2019 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen. You're a blessing :)

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