The Undead Story

Numb in this wrecked skin
My eyes still working hard in its blurred sight
Walked limply with no direction
Pursuit the hope of a lost life

This town is full of dead dreams
People dive in patterns of camouflaged sin
Those are black bloods which stained 
As well as my existence which is nearly dim

Dried roses fallen
Shattered as a carpet
My brain didn't work
But this bloody veins pushed me too hard

I fail to recall yesterday
As I fail to hope for tomorrow
This is the eternal thirst 
No water can satisfy this

I see somebody in that mirror
Not in a good shape nor in a good look
I tried to see it even closer
But the reflection keeps bumping at me

With amazement face, it stares back at me

I continue my walk in this messed street
I don't have any idea how it starts
I don't have any idea when it ends
I live for today, I live along with the step I take

Yanny Widjanarko 
October 18,2013
Halloween Poem Contest with Only 1 theme
Sponsor: Leonora Galinta
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/14/2013 8:57:00 PM
a most interesting title and concluding line for this one!! I live along with the step I take. I sure like that!!! I see this won in the contest. BIG congrats, dear.
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:52:00 AM
good poem Yanny congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/26/2013 5:36:00 PM
Thank you SH :D hug, Yanny
Date: 11/21/2013 5:06:00 PM
Congrats on the well deserved win :) Good one
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2013 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Karen, :D glad to see you here :D hug, Yanny
Date: 11/21/2013 4:46:00 AM
Good one Yanny, congratulations on your win xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2013 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Mandy, long time no see :D hug, hug, Yanny :p
Date: 11/20/2013 8:35:00 PM
Yanny, , Congratulations on your win. take care ~xox~ LINDA
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2013 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Lindaaa, hug, Yanny :D
Date: 11/20/2013 6:46:00 PM
You show pity for the poor Zombie and he needs it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2013 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Joyce, I loved your zombie poem too, and congrats to you too :D hug, Yanny
Date: 11/20/2013 4:55:00 PM
Yanny, . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2013 10:20:00 AM
Lol thanks Skat, don't worry I'm definitely stay fully alive lol :D glad to have you here Skat :D hug, yanny
Date: 11/20/2013 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Yanny
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2013 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram, pleasure to have your visit :)
Date: 11/20/2013 9:03:00 AM
Yay Yanny! Congratulationson your win!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/20/2013 9:14:00 AM
Yay! Finally! Lol, thanks Rick! :D how are you there? By the way, I just saw the last year fireflies tree again today, I always feel excited to see whenever I pass through that house :D
Date: 11/20/2013 8:11:00 AM
- Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem Yanny !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/20/2013 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Anne, lol, they are not real but my face seems like look almost similar as them now, lol glad to have you here Anne :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, Yanny
Date: 11/20/2013 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Yanny on your super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! By the way, I've missed seeing you around. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/20/2013 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Leonora, it is hard to stay awake at night now as my pregnancy getting bigger (I used to write at night :D) and your contest really recall all of my abandoned muse lol, glad to be apart of it :D and missed you too here :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, Yanny
Date: 11/1/2013 6:28:00 PM
It appers that you and I are on the same wave length. Check out my latest poem. I am a zombie as well *lol* This is really good, I am sure Leonora will love it!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/3/2013 9:10:00 AM
I read yours Rick, it is really hilarious one, you make it into an enjoyable masterpiece, good luck to you too for the contest :D hug, yanny
Date: 10/18/2013 3:56:00 PM
a great story of the undead good pen gl in contest Shadow x smile
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 10/18/2013 7:47:00 PM
Thanks Shadow :) glad to have a visit by you :) hug, yanny
Date: 10/18/2013 11:38:00 AM
- Strange creatures .... well it's just fantasy, Yanny. - Chilling written - Luck in contest! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 10/18/2013 11:42:00 AM
Thanks Anne, great to see you here today :D wishing you a wonderful day too there :D hug, Yanny
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