The Undead Story

Numb in this wrecked skin
My eyes still working hard in its blurred sight
Walked limply with no direction
Pursuit the hope of a lost life

This town is full of dead dreams
People dive in patterns of camouflaged sin
Those are black bloods which stained 
As well as my existence which is nearly dim

Dried roses fallen
Shattered as a carpet
My brain didn't work
But this bloody veins pushed me too hard

I fail to recall yesterday
As I fail to hope for tomorrow
This is the eternal thirst 
No water can satisfy this

I see somebody in that mirror
Not in a good shape nor in a good look
I tried to see it even closer
But the reflection keeps bumping at me

With amazement face, it stares back at me

I continue my walk in this messed street
I don't have any idea how it starts
I don't have any idea when it ends
I live for today, I live along with the step I take

Yanny Widjanarko 
October 18,2013
Halloween Poem Contest with Only 1 theme
Sponsor: Leonora Galinta
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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 8:57 PM
a most interesting title and concluding line for this one!! I live along with the step I take. I sure like that!!! I see this won in the contest. BIG congrats, dear.
Hamilton Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 4:52 AM
good poem Yanny congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
Widjanarko Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:36 PM
Thank you SH :D hug, Yanny
Anglesey Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 5:06 PM
Congrats on the well deserved win :) Good one
Widjanarko Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 10:24 AM
Thank you Karen, :D glad to see you here :D hug, Yanny
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 4:46 AM
Good one Yanny, congratulations on your win xx
Widjanarko Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 10:23 AM
Thank you Mandy, long time no see :D hug, hug, Yanny :p
A   Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 8:35 PM
Yanny, , Congratulations on your win. take care ~xox~ LINDA
Widjanarko Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Lindaaa, hug, Yanny :D
Johnson Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 6:46 PM
You show pity for the poor Zombie and he needs it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Widjanarko Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Thank you Joyce, I loved your zombie poem too, and congrats to you too :D hug, Yanny
A  Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 4:55 PM
Yanny, . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love
Widjanarko Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 10:20 AM
Lol thanks Skat, don't worry I'm definitely stay fully alive lol :D glad to have you here Skat :D hug, yanny
Mehta Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on the win, Yanny
Widjanarko Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 10:19 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram, pleasure to have your visit :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:03 AM
Yay Yanny! Congratulationson your win!
Widjanarko Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:14 AM
Yay! Finally! Lol, thanks Rick! :D how are you there? By the way, I just saw the last year fireflies tree again today, I always feel excited to see whenever I pass through that house :D
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 8:11 AM
- Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem Yanny !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:10 AM
Thanks Anne, lol, they are not real but my face seems like look almost similar as them now, lol glad to have you here Anne :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, Yanny
Gasun Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Yanny on your super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! By the way, I've missed seeing you around. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Widjanarko Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:08 AM
Thanks Leonora, it is hard to stay awake at night now as my pregnancy getting bigger (I used to write at night :D) and your contest really recall all of my abandoned muse lol, glad to be apart of it :D and missed you too here :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, Yanny
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November 1, 2013 at 6:28 PM
It appers that you and I are on the same wave length. Check out my latest poem. I am a zombie as well *lol* This is really good, I am sure Leonora will love it!
Widjanarko Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 9:10 AM
I read yours Rick, it is really hilarious one, you make it into an enjoyable masterpiece, good luck to you too for the contest :D hug, yanny
Hamilton Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 3:56 PM
a great story of the undead good pen gl in contest Shadow x smile
Widjanarko Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Thanks Shadow :) glad to have a visit by you :) hug, yanny
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 11:38 AM
- Strange creatures .... well it's just fantasy, Yanny. - Chilling written - Luck in contest! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 11:42 AM
Thanks Anne, great to see you here today :D wishing you a wonderful day too there :D hug, Yanny
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