The Un-Dead

At the Borgo Pass I met a coach and horse,
And the villagers warned me not to go,
They were worried about a supernatural force,
But I had business in Transylvania, though.

The coach rumbled along the Carpathian mountain road,
Through the lightning and pounding rain,
We arrived at an old, darkened abode,
And I thought this trip was all in "vein".

But then opened the great castle door,
And the Count bid me welcome to his house,
He cast no shadow on the floor,
Where scurried a bat and a mouse.

In the mirror he cast no reflection,
On our dinner he did not dine,
And upon my curious inspection,
He drank no water or wine.

Then late that night I awoke with fright,
As something hovered over my bed,
Then I felt a quick, sharp bite,
From a vampire who's eyes glowed red.

Then cried the children of the night,
As all at once, there shined a beam,
I awoke to see a ray of sunlight,
And realized it was all just a dream.




(This poem was my tribute to "Dracula" by Bram Stoker)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guzzi Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 7:55 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A  Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 6:13 PM
HEY KELLY, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Feeling like Bram Stoker is alive. Congrats on the win, kelly
Deschler Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram. Darren's contest was a fun one to be a part of! :)
Davis Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 4:43 PM
Kelly What a creative and unique story rhyme. You take the reader on a journey into a creepy and scary world, that seems so real. Dream or not, it is still dark and eerie. Nice job my friend Thanks for the great and sweet comment on my Holiday Heartache poem.
Deschler Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 10:33 PM
Thank you very much, Robin. I had a lot of fun writing this poem!
Dunn Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Very visual done quit well I enjoyed the journey to the world of the un-dead. It is a adventureious ride to travel beyond the world of light into the realm of the darker realm. Thank you for sharing your work and for your comments on mine.
Morgan Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 2:16 AM
it is but not a dream only your imagination Miss Kelly see you are wide awake! talking and seeing me clearly. . . . sorry i just had to add. . . exciting poem with the movie speed x40!
Mohammed Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 3:47 PM
I don't like dark stuff much Kelly but I found your rhyming quatrains to be an exceptional flow of thoughts. Its great to be back to peruse your work once more.
A   Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Hi Kelly,"You dream of creepy darkness... but still you dream," Beautiful ....xox...Linda
Kendrick Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 11:46 AM
Glad it was just a dream..Enjoyed reading your work that has great rhyme, rhythm, and flow..I feel a lighthearted emotion flow throughout even though it is serious..Thanks for your visit to my page..Your comment was encouraging...Sara
Mcdaid Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 11:17 AM
I ENJOYED THIS KELLY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
Ellison Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 8:34 PM
You are a story teller extraordinaire! An excellent write... hugs, Jack xoxox
Perry Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 6:51 PM
Great feel to this :)
Posey Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 5:08 PM
Really great writing. you are in control of your craft. You gain control of the readers and control them to the end..... Well done, my friend..... Hugs aplenty..... Jake
That Archaic Poet Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 4:55 PM
Cool piece; really felt like Bram Stoker's "Dracula". I felt like I was in the movie as I was reading; kudos! :)
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