The Uncontained

he parlayed a condom full of nouns
in bold thrusts of the quill
for the para structuralist cadres
many of them freeway orphans
who won't even read a stoplight
on the other hand
there's a lot of other hand
upon hearing the chimes of midnight
I opened the door 
another surprise party 
that I knew about all along
arranged by my body building therapist
who was a notorious sadist
requiring humiliation ab astra
went in after my scenario gland
in an act of divine pity
sewed me back up real fast
couldn't handle the pixel rate
the audience shrieked and laughed
it was the great awakening
after the Treaty of Lucky Seven
in which all nations pledged
to honor their accidents and idiocies 
as though they were instruments of divination
uh oh here comes my chiropractor
a known mob boss
never found the need to knock
cracked his knuckles at the door 
and politely asked may I enter  
he spoke 7 languages 
and several materialist dialects
and could talk without
moving his lips
many were blamed for
things they never said
a hundred times a day
nothing is uncontained
archaeologists in the city dumps
using a subway map with all the stops
snorted and toiled through Winter
at their historico-revisionist comedy
piecing convex to concave
any idea past its prime is stupid
this is the unfortunate fate of all humanity
nobody really likes change 
unless it’s more money
oh I know I’ll never work in this town again
but with a bankroll
the size of a chewed pencil
you get the picture
now buckle up kids
mommy's going to drive a little faster
there's a cop on my ass
and I think I can lose him


From "Engine of Didactic Beauty" available on Amazon
Artist Portfolio: http://walteralter.byethost32.com/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/7/2016 6:27:00 PM
Dear Walter Your ending here is my favorite part, although the silent one is right there are other amazing lines in this piece, and your play on words here is wonderful in usage and imagery, your a very talented fellow, glad I stopped by to read this one, excellent stuff, and thanks for reading a few from my site also, I enjoyed your feedback, I'll read another of yours, because i did enjoy this piece have a great nite, cheri
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Date: 3/7/2016 11:18:00 PM
Thanks, Cherl, I write like channel surfing with a remote TV tuner and let the ideas clash and swirl as they might. At one point in the early 90's I actually had an array of a dozen or so TV's that I watched simultaneously. It made me immune to "data overload", LOL!
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