The Unbound Soul

Deep beneath the upright mind,
far deeper than the unconscious,
unseen, unfelt, unknown, yet...
rare, very rarely its intimations
will sudden-like float through 
your veins, then your brain,
and thrilled beyond reason
you will wonder for such a
small moment what waved
your soul to come alive....

[written and posted 9/2019]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:07 PM
I love that part "you will wonder for such a small moment...." Nice!
Carber Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Andrea, I like that bit too!
Brewer Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 3:17 AM
These moments are indeed to be treasured. I think they may vary in nature, when YOU (the soul) break free - could be (for me) any thing from ecstasy to a feeling that everything is ALRIGHT. Blessings on you, Len.
Carber Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, my friend-- and may God keep and bless always you and yours!
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Yes indeed--those small moments that make soul alive are precious..so well written!
Carber Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, Vijay, I'm glad you liked it.
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