The Ultimate Spaceship

... The Ultimate Spaceship (I) (can) (explore) (outer space) <<<< (beyond this world and through our universe.>>>> <<<<(Investigate… the beginning of time.>>>> (Earth’s creation.) (truth’s reality) (knowledge) (blast!) () ( ) ( ) ( ) ( O ) ( F ) ( F ) ADVENTURE IS MY SPECIALTY TRAVEL WITH ME TO THE ABSOLUTE EDGE OF THE UNEXPLORED © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 26, 2010 Poetic form: Shape with the main body being double-tetractys

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Date: 1/27/2010 11:19:00 AM

And creativity seems to be your specialty too. I really like shape poems as they approach art on more than one level. Nice job with this one. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/27/2010 6:51:00 AM

Interesting form... You are combining forms too.... Good job, I tought I was the only one.......:JP]

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/27/2010 5:48:00 AM

Hi Dane Ann, what an experience with the space ship! I like your form and wirds. I think each one of us could blast off to the unexplored even though only with our minds. Beeing in outer space must be a wonderful feeling, to see the earth from far above and blue, a pearl in the dark universe. Well done and thank you for all your kind comments. Picked up a cold and stay at home...Love, Gert

Lena Townsend

Date: 1/27/2010 5:45:00 AM

This is awesome. This form is difficult for me. I can never seem to get the words to fit the way I want them to. You seem to have this one mastered. Thank you for sharing and for your wonderful comments on my poetry. Smiles from Lolita