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The Ultimate Prize

There are failures who express truth as the belief in others
And litigate with Jesus Christ to absolve themselves of blame,
Because success to them is in the visions of jealous minds,
And their approval valued as if they control destiny.

Foolish heart; set your sight upon God, and place love above pride,
And be not a worthless flutterance grasping for altitude:
Set for yourself the ultimate prize and seek eternal life,
And shun envy’s definition of Christ from misleading you.

At the guest’s table, earthly treasures you believe the answer,
Where consequence of decision is discarded as irrelevant.
At a predetermined time, your compromise will be rendered,
As your demeanor is exposed and intentions declarant.

In the halls of justice, mercy is extended by forgiveness;
Look in His direction with confession a prerequisite.
Wary entrapment and do not company with the faithless;
The ultimate prize of eternal life is the gift Jesus gives.
                                     ***

References:
Matthew 26:17-30
Mark14:12-26
Luke 22:7-38
John 13:1-32

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/21/2018 9:53:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Dennis. Well done.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 7/22/2018 11:13:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/21/2018 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Interesting and well done.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 7/22/2018 11:13:00 AM
And congrats to your win for your poem "My Journey."
Date: 7/19/2018 7:43:00 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Dennis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 7/19/2018 12:02:00 PM
Thank you very much for your flattering remarks & placement in your contest.
Date: 7/19/2018 7:31:00 AM
Interesting take on the contest Dennis.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 7/19/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thank you. Da Vinci captures the essence of Christianity in the "Last Supper." Christ's offering of eternity & Judas clutching the coin bag; conscientiously deciding to forsake Christ's Kingdom to follow another.
Date: 7/4/2018 9:52:00 PM
Dennis.. I enjoyed your Spirit infused prose!!
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 7/7/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thank you very much
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