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The Ultimate Life

What is the ultimate life All about? It is about being holy It is about being healthy It is about being happy It is about making things happen With tremendous magnitude And flowing smoothly In the right direction It is all about being effective And efficient in life

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/26/2022 6:38:00 AM

Yes. That’s Idealism. But path of life is uneven. Every day you will have to struggle. Blessings

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/22/2022 2:52:00 PM

Very good things to think about as we go about our lives each day. Well done :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/21/2022 7:26:00 AM

Your positivity is contagious Irfanulla! Linda

Jeff Kyser

Date: 9/21/2022 7:22:00 AM

I think you've articulated a proper order. Holiness leads to healthiness in outlook, and can manifest itself in the physical as well. And to be properly holy is to recognize that holiness is conferred, not earned, which puts everything in proper perspective, including our view of our fellow travelers. Contentment comes from recognizing we are not in control, and frees us to do our best in the areas where we can have influence. That that leads to a productive life! Nice!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/20/2022 11:01:00 AM

It's obeying God's will. Well argued.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/18/2022 2:55:00 PM

we do our best every day and we should never give up, thank you for such an encouraging message, God bless