The Ultimate Life

What is the ultimate life
All about?
It is about being holy
It is about being healthy
It is about being happy
It is about making things happen
With tremendous magnitude 
And flowing smoothly
In the right direction
It is all about being effective
And efficient in life

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Date: 9/26/2022 6:38:00 AM
Yes. That’s Idealism. But path of life is uneven. Every day you will have to struggle. Blessings
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Date: 9/22/2022 2:52:00 PM
Very good things to think about as we go about our lives each day. Well done :)
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Date: 9/21/2022 7:26:00 AM
Your positivity is contagious Irfanulla! Linda
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Date: 9/21/2022 7:22:00 AM
I think you've articulated a proper order. Holiness leads to healthiness in outlook, and can manifest itself in the physical as well. And to be properly holy is to recognize that holiness is conferred, not earned, which puts everything in proper perspective, including our view of our fellow travelers. Contentment comes from recognizing we are not in control, and frees us to do our best in the areas where we can have influence. That that leads to a productive life! Nice!
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Date: 9/20/2022 11:01:00 AM
It's obeying God's will. Well argued.
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Date: 9/18/2022 2:55:00 PM
we do our best every day and we should never give up, thank you for such an encouraging message, God bless
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