The Ultimate Life

What is the ultimate life
All about?
It is about being holy
It is about being healthy
It is about being happy
It is about making things happen
With tremendous magnitude 
And flowing smoothly
In the right direction
It is all about being effective
And efficient in life
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Dutta Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 6:38 AM
Yes. That’s Idealism. But path of life is uneven. Every day you will have to struggle. Blessings
Sands Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 2:52 PM
Very good things to think about as we go about our lives each day. Well done :)
Fowler Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:26 AM
Your positivity is contagious Irfanulla! Linda
Kyser Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:22 AM
I think you've articulated a proper order. Holiness leads to healthiness in outlook, and can manifest itself in the physical as well. And to be properly holy is to recognize that holiness is conferred, not earned, which puts everything in proper perspective, including our view of our fellow travelers. Contentment comes from recognizing we are not in control, and frees us to do our best in the areas where we can have influence. That that leads to a productive life! Nice!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 11:01 AM
It's obeying God's will. Well argued.
Rose  Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 2:55 PM
we do our best every day and we should never give up, thank you for such an encouraging message, God bless
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