The Ultimate Flight

Pouty lips crave your passionate kisses  
Why must you torture me, by holding back 
Give into your heart's desire and feel bliss
It will be our love song , a sweet soundtrack 

This melodious tune will play all night 
You and you alone can put out this fire
You're the pilot, take me on a good flight 
I'm the passenger please take me higher 

I don't mind turbulence, just go steady
The altitude is just right, I can't wait
It will be a nice trip, I am so ready
My love this is such a heavenly state

Baby I hear birds singing, we must land
It's fine my love because it was quite grand


11-22-16
Alexis Y.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:03 PM
That's beautiful Alexis, WoW!
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 1:22 AM
I was perusing your list to find a sonnet! And found this little gem! I have become very fond of them lately. Do you find them difficult to compose? They are a challenge I have found. Once again, a great sonnet.
Y. Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 3:51 AM
Hi Rick, Thank you so much. Yes, I do find writing Sonnets difficult. That's why I don't write them that much. I must say that you do a great job writing Sonnets. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis
Nusker Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Goodness, your metaphors are quite raunchy or maybe my state of mind is, after reading this passionate poem. Excellent work.
Y. Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 1:35 PM
Hi Afzal, I take that as a compliment. I appreciate your support: -)Alexis
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November 24, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Very sensuous poem, Alexis. You must have had your sexy muse working this one, right. Cool and very romantic poem, lady. I like this one a whole lot. It's a top notch poem, a solid gold sonnet. Love and peace to you.
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November 22, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Beautiful, Alexis, good rhyme, flow, syllable count, and subject matter is great I love that first sentence, Pouty lips & I'm the passenger take me higher ..Wow Hugs Eve
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November 22, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Cool metaphors, even cooler poem, Alexis. You don't mind turbulence ... you kidding me. I love the flow of this poem though. Very good sonnet, lady. Love and peace.
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November 22, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Great poem Alexis x
Green Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Hmmm, sounds like someone was riding in first class. : ) This was a fun trip Alexis, love sure does feel like that. Flying high, head in the clouds, every things is beautiful and peaceful and so is your poem my sweet friend.
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 8:44 AM
wow you are flying high with this poem Alexis! lovely sonnet:-) hugs Jan xx
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November 22, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Lovely sonnet Alexis.
Y. Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Hi Phil, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis
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