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The Ultimate Flight

Pouty lips crave your passionate kisses Why must you torture me, by holding back Give into your heart's desire and feel bliss It will be our love song , a sweet soundtrack This melodious tune will play all night You and you alone can put out this fire You're the pilot, take me on a good flight I'm the passenger please take me higher I don't mind turbulence, just go steady The altitude is just right, I can't wait It will be a nice trip, I am so ready My love this is such a heavenly state Baby I hear birds singing, we must land It's fine my love because it was quite grand 11-22-16 Alexis Y.

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Bobby May

Date: 12/18/2018 8:03:00 PM

That's beautiful Alexis, WoW!

White Wolf

Date: 12/15/2016 1:22:00 AM

I was perusing your list to find a sonnet! And found this little gem! I have become very fond of them lately. Do you find them difficult to compose? They are a challenge I have found. Once again, a great sonnet.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/15/2016 3:51:00 AM

Hi Rick, Thank you so much. Yes, I do find writing Sonnets difficult. That's why I don't write them that much. I must say that you do a great job writing Sonnets. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/11/2016 1:30:00 PM

Goodness, your metaphors are quite raunchy or maybe my state of mind is, after reading this passionate poem. Excellent work.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2016 1:35:00 PM

Hi Afzal, I take that as a compliment. I appreciate your support: -)Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/24/2016 8:02:00 AM

Very sensuous poem, Alexis. You must have had your sexy muse working this one, right. Cool and very romantic poem, lady. I like this one a whole lot. It's a top notch poem, a solid gold sonnet. Love and peace to you.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/22/2016 7:50:00 PM

Beautiful, Alexis, good rhyme, flow, syllable count, and subject matter is great I love that first sentence, Pouty lips & I'm the passenger take me higher ..Wow Hugs Eve

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/22/2016 2:31:00 PM

Cool metaphors, even cooler poem, Alexis. You don't mind turbulence ... you kidding me. I love the flow of this poem though. Very good sonnet, lady. Love and peace.

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 11/22/2016 11:11:00 AM

Great poem Alexis x

Chris Green

Date: 11/22/2016 9:02:00 AM

Hmmm, sounds like someone was riding in first class. : ) This was a fun trip Alexis, love sure does feel like that. Flying high, head in the clouds, every things is beautiful and peaceful and so is your poem my sweet friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2016 8:44:00 AM

wow you are flying high with this poem Alexis! lovely sonnet:-) hugs Jan xx

Phil Capitano

Date: 11/22/2016 8:42:00 AM

Lovely sonnet Alexis.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/25/2016 12:27:00 PM

Hi Phil, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis