Mohamed Omar Poet Rhyme

The Ultimate Disciple

Lean on one pressed between two
 Draw history better than me and you
  Blood and bone
   Never works alone
     Say with no sound
      Mark steps on flesh and ground
       Though has no heart or ears 
         Know all beats and fears
          Never break a promise nor tell a lie
            Though always kiss to tell good-bye 
              Believe whatever you say
               And move only to obey 
                Best friend faithful slave
                  Always die thirsty and brave

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Jessica Thompson August 18, 2021 at 2:38 PM Nice poem Mohamed. I liked how the poem told the story, then came to an intense, abrupt ending. Take care, Jess :) Mohamed Omar August 20, 2021 at 12:28 AM Thank you for your beautiful comment . I always have this passionate to my dear loyal Pen. I think pen is the twin of every writer and should be appreciated .....

Lucilla Carrillo September 28, 2012 at 5:50 PM Good work. I enjoyed it, Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Robert Pettit September 27, 2012 at 11:35 AM Good rhyming in this write.